irondudez Posted April 12, 2005 Author Share Posted April 12, 2005 I was just thinking about this, but how about Tallahassee Sharks instead of Orlando Sharks... I like the sound of Tallahassee better.. What do you all think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 I am not sure if nitpicking is what you are looking for, but I will do it anyhow.The mouth looks a lot better with the black in there, but since you filled up the space with black it absorbed the black outlines of the teeth. Now all the teeth look like tiny white stubs. The teeth need to be made bigger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 MUCH better - great work - i like nafsder's suggestion on the change to the "r" and negative space fin...try it and see how it looks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 12, 2005 Author Share Posted April 12, 2005 heres an update. I thickened the teeth too make them more visible. Also, I couldnt really understand what you guys were saying about the R, but i think i know what you were saying (I changed the R). I also changed the city to Tallahassee because 1) it fills the logo more nicely, and 2) i sounds a little better.EDIT: I accidently took this off my gallery, but just look at the next post as it is the same exact logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 12, 2005 Author Share Posted April 12, 2005 EDIT: I thickened the wordmark text in the 2nd oneI decided to mess around with the wordmark, and try something different. I made the same logo w/ a different wordmark. I want to know which one you guys think looks better.. (along w/ some suggestions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonoMan Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 The second one looks great......So what is the next project? I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 12, 2005 Author Share Posted April 12, 2005 The second one looks great......So what is the next project? i think I'm gonna attempt either a Vipers logo set, or a Hawks logo set next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 you're so close to perfect...use the second wordmark and try to incorporate the shark fin like you did in the previous concept...maybe in the "R" or the "K"...then you're done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 Nice--I like the second wordmark better--but both work for the logo... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nafsder2003 Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 Uh oh...one more little piece of nit picking. I didn't see it when the logos were small, but in the most recent post, the top logo has the base of the S shifted slightly higher than the bases of the other letters. Otherwise, great job. This has come a long way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alphabet Man Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 you're so close to perfect...use the second wordmark and try to incorporate the shark fin like you did in the previous concept...maybe in the "R" or the "K"...then you're done yeah do it in the K though twitter.com/thebrainofMatt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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