creativelysain Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Thanks to winghaz, who got me to look at the atrocious logos from the Dakota Athletic Conference in a previous thread, I am re-doing some of them and may consider sending them in as well, (as if they'll accept). Their colors are Royal Blue and Black, but that just didn't work with what I did because it became unreadable and the dark colors mixed together too easily. So I did them in a personal favorite (Carolina Blue and Navy) but if anyone has any suggestions to other colors, I'd be open to change.C&C welcome. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 That's some very good work there! I love the colors... The only thing I'm not really sure of is the E in Comets... I think it might look better if the left part of it was straight, like the C (and the T).Can you post the planet only, to show a secondary logo?That's some solid work though, very good start! Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AAO Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Amazing job, bro. My only nitpick is that since the name is 'Comets', i think you should focus on a comet for secondaries instead of the planet Saturn. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yankeeman Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Amazing job, bro. My only nitpick is that since the name is 'Comets', i think you should focus on a comet for secondaries instead of the planet Saturn. I agree...I think the planet is overkill. But the rest of it looks amazing. Very cool concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 Good point guys (about the planet sec.), I just posted the it because pollux wanted to see it by itself. I'll try the comet secondary too.I just noticed the bottom star needs to overlap instead of go under the wordmark too. Don't you hate it when you find mistakes AFTER you post. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 The planet looks good by itself, but it doesn't say Comets (so I agree with all posts above )I think that if you do keep your primary as it is, you might want to consider the planet with MS in front as a tertiary mark.Keep working on it! It's looking good already!! Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 lightbluenc, that is fantastic. Great job. Of course, just about anything is better than the regular Mayville State logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeneralW91 Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 I like this, though as someone said already, the Saturn shouldn't be there. It makes the logo seem to busy. However, everything else is fine. I love the color scheme! www.ABAsite.tk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 Should I get rid of the planet all together and use it for a secondary/tertiary, or just reduce it's size? I don't want the logo to just be a glorified wordmark, if you can say that. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeneralW91 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Re-sizing it might be better, if you still want to keep a lot of "substance" to the logo. www.ABAsite.tk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 that is awesome!! A lot of potential with this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Holy crap, I never thought i'd come to this board and see a topic about the Mayville State Comets! Winghaz, did you go there or something? @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 Thanks for the comments so far guys. I'm going to re-size the planet and see what comes out.Will post the changes in a little bit... Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 The one thing that seems a little weird to me is that the star under the 'E' gets cut off at the top while none of the rest do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 Re-sized the planet:Comet secondary:thoughts? Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ezreiter3 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Fan-freaking-tasticThat secondary screams "put me on a white football helmet"The only nitpick i can see is that there might be a few too many stars for my taste Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Oh, no, not a white helmet. A navy helmet with blue stars on it and the silver comet as the main logo on the side. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 lightbluenc:I REALLY like that MSU with the comet over the top. That is REALLY good.At first I liked the MS logo with Saturn in it, but then had second thoughts about it. Not about Saturn, but about the initials MS -- which also stand for multiple sclerosis, an ailment that sadly is quite common in North Dakota (my son even has it).But you came through bigtime with that MSU logo. Fantastic. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 lightbluenc - i really like what you've done - very creative and well rendered, but i don't think it's leaps and bounds ahead of what mayville state currently uses - what they have is simple and understated and certainly not as creative as your design, but i think it's very effective - i could be dead wrong on this, but i don't think what they currently use is horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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