DawgPacPBH 57 Posted June 1, 2005 this is for a request and I wanted to get some C+C, as this is my first concept in a while. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LEWJ 179 Posted June 1, 2005 IMO the "Y" and "S" in "Yellow Jackets" are a little too big, other than that, it looks great 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
winters in buffalo 131 Posted June 1, 2005 Needs some work, but it's a good start. Flip the wings up instead of down, and make them white instead of blue. And add some legs. It looks like a winged worm. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IronChefShark 2 Posted June 1, 2005 a yellowjacket with no jaws? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
edge1 28 Posted June 2, 2005 like the changes, but the Y and S are still too big 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Geoff 589 Posted June 2, 2005 The aformentioned Y and S and what exactly is it that he will let us do? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DawgPacPBH 57 Posted June 2, 2005 The aformentioned Y and S and what exactly is it that he will let us do?LETU, LeTourneau University 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OMMF 120 Posted June 2, 2005 LeTourneau University huh? All female staff and classes stuffed with underage students. I like the second design better. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nick in England 0 Posted June 2, 2005 I would make the antenna shorter... And make the eyes look less sleepy!I'd also keep the black outline going so there is no white and yellow butting together where the wings meet the body 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zoneranger 1 Posted June 2, 2005 Nice job...but it needs BIGGER wings! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites