DawgPacPBH Posted June 1, 2005 Share Posted June 1, 2005 this is for a request and I wanted to get some C+C, as this is my first concept in a while. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted June 1, 2005 Share Posted June 1, 2005 IMO the "Y" and "S" in "Yellow Jackets" are a little too big, other than that, it looks great | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted June 1, 2005 Share Posted June 1, 2005 Needs some work, but it's a good start. Flip the wings up instead of down, and make them white instead of blue. And add some legs. It looks like a winged worm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IronChefShark Posted June 1, 2005 Share Posted June 1, 2005 a yellowjacket with no jaws? US state flag concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted June 1, 2005 Author Share Posted June 1, 2005 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 like the changes, but the Y and S are still too big 5-time Defending NL East Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 The aformentioned Y and S and what exactly is it that he will let us do? Athletic Director: KTU Blue Grassers Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted June 2, 2005 Author Share Posted June 2, 2005 The aformentioned Y and S and what exactly is it that he will let us do?LETU, LeTourneau University peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMMF Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 LeTourneau University huh? All female staff and classes stuffed with underage students. I like the second design better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick in England Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 I would make the antenna shorter... And make the eyes look less sleepy!I'd also keep the black outline going so there is no white and yellow butting together where the wings meet the body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoneranger Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 Nice job...but it needs BIGGER wings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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