patsox Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Cleaned it up <slightly>C&C Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 i like it. im not sure how good the "S" will look if u actually had to put it across the buttons- but on paper it looks good. interesting take on the arm stripes and pants- football-esquethe red's my fav. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Football striping on baseball uniforms looks like football striping on baseball uniforms. Like it doesn't belong. I don't even like the Bronco-style stripes on football uniforms.The wordmark could work, but the striping just looks added on and cluttered. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zer0dotcom Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 You have a good idea going, just gotta practive a bit more with paint to get the images cleaned up.Your alternate logo and wordmarks are good ideas, and you've presented them well. Keep at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 22, 2005 Author Share Posted July 22, 2005 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Meh, doesn't really blow me away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sscrunner06 Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 I really like the idea, but I agree that it needs to be cleaned up a little bit. I really like the home and away wordmark, although I'm not exactly sure how the striping would look on a real jersey. My favorite is the red jersey also, just increase the size of the star a little bit. I think it's a good start...just needs a few changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted July 25, 2005 Share Posted July 25, 2005 Still not a fan of the striping concept. The football-style stripes look wrong on baseball pants, and I don't know if the stripes across the tops of the shoulders belong even in football, let alone the team representing our country in our national pastime. I'd go for something a little more dignified and traditional.I don't remember if these were there on the first go-round, but the numbers on the front are too small and too close to the wordmark. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted July 25, 2005 Share Posted July 25, 2005 How much time did you really spend, after you had roughed out the concept, cleaning up the details? I know Paint doesn't give you a whole lot of help, but when your concept is roughly rendered, it looks like you don't care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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