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Nice start - I can see the "swan" trying to come out of the egg. It takes time for you to hone your skills. I remember my first attempts with paint, over time you will get better.

When your ready, work up to an illustrator program. I have had my illiustrator for 2 years and I stink - but I am getting better. Just have fun with it, keep posting your concepts. You are off to a good start.

Great to have you on Board!!! :D

KCScout76

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im gonna look pass that u used paint and just look at ur idea

i like ur idea, but i think its a bit repetitve with the T R in the middle since there is already toronto raptors text in the logo

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Why is the red a different colour than the Raptor? You might want to make them the same.

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Welcome!

I understand that it's your first Paint concept, but why is it so scraggly? Clean it up a bit and make it neater; so what if it takes longer? It makes your work look a bit nicer, and you'll be more proud in the end.

After that, as ucla said, it is a bit repetitive, and is just including both logos. You don't need it to say Toronto Raptors, and then have the "TR" in there as well.

Also, as brass said, change the shade of red - either of them. You don't need two different shades in there, it's just confusing.

Not bad for a start, but you could go a lot neater.

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