goforbroke Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 came into my head when the expos were considering a permanent move to puerto rico...very simple-- i feel like it needs something more.. like a baseball circle in the back or something. im working on an alt.here is the wordmark and a cap or sleeve logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 I like it. I like it as a wordmark the best. Im not a fan of having the team initiant ie Jays "J" on the logo. Id rather see a PR, or a San Juan or whatever it is on the cap. But this is a nice design. Id love to see the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 10, 2005 Author Share Posted August 10, 2005 two more suggestions for patches or maybe a primary logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 10, 2005 Author Share Posted August 10, 2005 no other comments? not getting much feedback on my logos anymore. funny considering all the controvery about the 3D ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 Like the concept, and well-executed. But it is sorta ho-hum.Since the island of Puerto Rico is roughly in the shape of a rectangle (with the long axis running horizontally), consider dumping the nondescript oval and making the contour of the island the shape of the logo.Also, as was said, the "V/flag" would not make a good cap logo; a "PR" monogram should be the central theme of the logo on the cap. Team initials don't belong on caps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hhfranks Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 I love the use of the V as a flagpole..very nice..but it seems like the flag overpowers the rest of the logo..maybe you could try making the lettering bolder or something that will add some life to it..the incorporation of the flag is great..I would love to see some uniforms to go with these logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 I'm picturing the flag flying on a ship's mast as the primary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 Your flag is very nice but it definitely needs something more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boricuahitman Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 The Name is wrong, all wrong. Im puerto rican and i can tell you that voyage really has nothing to do with puerto rico. A smart name would be something to do with the island mystery and beauty and people. Me and my friends usually throw around stupid ones like "San Juan CoquÃ's" or "San Juan WAAAAAAPPPPAAAAASSSS" lol but in all seriousness, CoquÃ's are a great name for a team i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 11, 2005 Author Share Posted August 11, 2005 i dont know what a coqui is. i chose voyagers because A- of the team's seemingly endless travels (especially considering that the team would probably have very long road trips) and B- because i wanted to use the V as a flagpole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 No, THESE are Puerto Rican Voyagers: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 12, 2005 Author Share Posted August 12, 2005 so whats a coqui? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizznick Posted August 12, 2005 Share Posted August 12, 2005 so whats a coqui? Basically, it's a tree frog. Their name comes from the sound they make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 13, 2005 Author Share Posted August 13, 2005 i decided its a basketball team now haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted August 14, 2005 Share Posted August 14, 2005 Not bad as a basketball set. Not bad at all.I would change the neckline for the back of the jersey - the low cut should face forward! Not sure about making the "OYAGERS" smaller than the "V" without any other graphic effects to necessitate it (stripe/bar/tail, etc.). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted August 16, 2005 Author Share Posted August 16, 2005 also a bump. some c&c please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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