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puerto rico voyagers

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came into my head when the expos were considering a permanent move to puerto rico...

very simple-- i feel like it needs something more.. like a baseball circle in the back or something. im working on an alt.

here is the wordmark and a cap or sleeve logo.

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I like it. I like it as a wordmark the best. Im not a fan of having the team initiant ie Jays "J" on the logo. Id rather see a PR, or a San Juan or whatever it is on the cap. But this is a nice design. Id love to see the whole thing.

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v2.jpg

v3.jpg

two more suggestions for patches or maybe a primary logo

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no other comments? not getting much feedback on my logos anymore. funny considering all the controvery about the 3D ones.

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Like the concept, and well-executed. But it is sorta ho-hum.

Since the island of Puerto Rico is roughly in the shape of a rectangle (with the long axis running horizontally), consider dumping the nondescript oval and making the contour of the island the shape of the logo.

Also, as was said, the "V/flag" would not make a good cap logo; a "PR" monogram should be the central theme of the logo on the cap. Team initials don't belong on caps.

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I love the use of the V as a flagpole..very nice..but it seems like the flag overpowers the rest of the logo..maybe you could try making the lettering bolder or something that will add some life to it..the incorporation of the flag is great..I would love to see some uniforms to go with these logos

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I'm picturing the flag flying on a ship's mast as the primary.

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The Name is wrong, all wrong. Im puerto rican and i can tell you that voyage really has nothing to do with puerto rico. A smart name would be something to do with the island mystery and beauty and people. Me and my friends usually throw around stupid ones like "San Juan Coquí's" or "San Juan WAAAAAAPPPPAAAAASSSS" lol but in all seriousness, Coquí's are a great name for a team i think.

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i dont know what a coqui is. i chose voyagers because A- of the team's seemingly endless travels (especially considering that the team would probably have very long road trips) and B- because i wanted to use the V as a flagpole

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No, THESE are Puerto Rican Voyagers:

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so whats a coqui?

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so whats a coqui?

Basically, it's a tree frog. Their name comes from the sound they make.

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i decided its a basketball team now haha.

v4.jpg

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Not bad as a basketball set. Not bad at all.

I would change the neckline for the back of the jersey - the low cut should face forward! :P

Not sure about making the "OYAGERS" smaller than the "V" without any other graphic effects to necessitate it (stripe/bar/tail, etc.).

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also a bump. some c&c please

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