blue jays concept

[MotownMadman11]

will do an away and alternate if requested

took a couple of hours on this one and really tried to TAKE MY TIME

im done doing 3/4 a day and will now do maybe one every 3/4 days

comments and criticism please

im just a 14 yr old kid with ideas, too many ideas and i really need to take my time on this stuff

[VitaminD]

Sorry, dude. I don't want to sound like a broken record, and I am not trying to do anything but offer some suggestions from another point of view.

This is exactly what some of us meant by "mishmash ". 3 Blue Jay logos from 3 different eras, all on the same uniform. It looks like you took as many insignia as you could find and slapped them on a template without any respect to whether they fit together. The hat logo appears only on the hat. The sleeve patch appears nowhere else. And there is a jersey body logo that differs from the 2 other logos already on the jersey.

And the team's name is the Toronto BLUE JAYS. I see far more black then blue. Black lettering, black logo, black cap bill, black belt (which means black shoes)... hell, even the Canadian Maple Leaf is black. Black and royal blue don't look good together, and here they are as essentially the only two colors you use (not counting the yellow bat, and the red baseball stitches). Royal blue has been reduced to a thin line on the interior of the thick, black lettering, as a thin outline around a thick, black maple leaf, and to define the blue jay, which is a mildly abstract representation of the bird itself and has very little definition against a black background.

Keep at it... I hope some of what we're offering is coming across.

[IceCap]

Sorry, dude. I don't want to sound like a broken record, and I am not trying to do anything but offer some suggestions from another point of view.

This is exactly what some of us meant by "mishmash ". 3 Blue Jay logos from 3 different eras, all on the same uniform. It looks like you took as many insignia as you could find and slapped them on a template without any respect to whether they fit together. The hat logo appears only on the hat. The sleeve patch appears nowhere else. And there is a jersey body logo that differs from the 2 other logos already on the jersey.

And the team's name is the Toronto BLUE JAYS. I see far more black then blue. Black lettering, black logo, black cap bill, black belt (which means black shoes)... hell, even the Canadian Maple Leaf is black. Black and royal blue don't look good together, and here they are as essentially the only two colors you use (not counting the yellow bat, and the red baseball stitches). Royal blue has been reduced to a thin line on the interior of the thick, black lettering, as a thin outline around a thick, black maple leaf, and to define the blue jay, which is a mildly abstract representation of the bird itself and has very little definition against a black background.

Keep at it... I hope some of what we're offering is coming across.

i second all of this. well said VD.

i would also like to point out that a black flower is a sighn of death, so a black maple leaf is implying the "death" of the maple leaf. i would stear clear of that.

[kingssss]

Yay, lets give the blue jays more black than they already have. i think you should try to slow down and exuecute better on these concepts.....youre going way to fast imo. 3 diff jays logos? i dont think this one really works. i second VitD.

[Davey]

we are known as the blue jays, we wana see more blue ! lol

[LMU]

Yeah, not feeling it at all. And, I again emphasize that you should slow down and put quality above quantity.

[bulldogbarks55]

All of us TRUE BLUE Jays fans are STILL waiting for a tasteful concept with no black or graphite and calling the team "Blue Jays." And don't forget the maple leaf.

[sean69]

The wat they have been playing lately BLACK JAYS fit.