high school football concept

[Antediluvious]

here's a concept that i've developed for my high school's football team. i did all these in paint, and some things (specifically the helmet logo), could use some cleaning up, but i thought i'd post this and get some feedback.

[redsfan39]

The grey alt really comes out of left field for me. Try numbers on the shoulders too. The number font doesnt wow me, I dont really think it fits all that well. This has some potential...I want to see where it goes from here.

[OB33]

The archy Broncoesqe striping in the back doesn't work for me. And the alt could use some green.

But this has mad potential.

[leafs13]

The logo is not very original. Titans mod. And it has nothing to do with a Titan.

The jerseys are good, except for the weird green stripes.

[benJAMMIN039]

The numbers are a bit too far down. Not digging the Miami-esque stripes here however. That Logo i think would be sweet for a team named the comets, but i dont think it works here for the titans. Overall, nice start.

[Antediluvious]

i wasn't digging the fireball logo either. i found this website on my school's official logo.

so i took that, recolored the blue a little bit (the blue we use for sports really isn't that light), and came up with this helmet.

so is this better? worse? is the gray ok? feedback would be great.

and i'm working on the other things mentioned in this thread as well. thanks to everyone who responded.