cyandlux

Hartford Football concept

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No opinions or criticisms!?!

Probably no criticisms because there isn't much to criticise here :notworthy: .

All I can say is that it looks like the logo is just floating above the wordmark and the city name is floating below it. If they could be tied together somewhow I think it would be perfect.

LT

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I think it's an original logo. I don't like it. Don't get upset. I just think it is missing something.

No, thats good and it kinda helps....unlike "horrible logo dude".

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Right now it's very flat, very two-dimensional. Some simple highlights and/or shadows would really help.

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top one, (golden eye) is the best... sleek / classy.

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I made the white outline on the bird thicker and I made the head swoop more to give it more movement and this one has the yellow eyes.

robins011.jpg

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These are the basic three designs I used as style examples...

AZ_290.gif

BAL_321.gif

DEN_457.gif

I didnt think mine popped enough so I put in the yellow eye.

What do you think?

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This is minor, but the outline from the nect to the back of the head is a straight segment right now. I would consider changing it into a curved segment like the rest of the outline. Also, the bird is not quite centered over the wordmark now. Again, very minor. Also, I can't quite place what needs tweaking on the beak, but I think there is something that can be done. I don't know, maybe the dividing line between the upper and lower beak should line up with the point of the gray "V" shape above it (assuming both are meant to separate the upper and lower beak). Otherwise I honestlly don't have a problem with this design.

LT

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Gettin closer, try getting rid of a color (the grey), it will increase contrast and flexibility of the logo.

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