jake122683 0 Posted September 7, 2005 horrible logo dude 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 7, 2005 Thanks for the constructive critisism, ya jerk. Your stuff...outstanding, Im sure. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 8, 2005 Bump for update....C&C...yummy 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 8, 2005 Bump: for the morning rush. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 8, 2005 No opinions or criticisms!?! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ltravisjr 51 Posted September 8, 2005 No opinions or criticisms!?! Probably no criticisms because there isn't much to criticise here .All I can say is that it looks like the logo is just floating above the wordmark and the city name is floating below it. If they could be tied together somewhow I think it would be perfect.LT 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BuddyLane 0 Posted September 8, 2005 I think it's an original logo. I don't like it. Don't get upset. I just think it is missing something. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 8, 2005 I think it's an original logo. I don't like it. Don't get upset. I just think it is missing something. No, thats good and it kinda helps....unlike "horrible logo dude". 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dgnmrwrw 119 Posted September 8, 2005 Right now it's very flat, very two-dimensional. Some simple highlights and/or shadows would really help. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
P.I.L.L. 31 Posted September 8, 2005 top one, (golden eye) is the best... sleek / classy. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 8, 2005 A little highlight under the chin. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 9, 2005 I made the white outline on the bird thicker and I made the head swoop more to give it more movement and this one has the yellow eyes. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 9, 2005 These are the basic three designs I used as style examples...I didnt think mine popped enough so I put in the yellow eye.What do you think? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BuddyLane 0 Posted September 9, 2005 There is still something missing. Try to tweak the beak some. I think that might help. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ltravisjr 51 Posted September 9, 2005 This is minor, but the outline from the nect to the back of the head is a straight segment right now. I would consider changing it into a curved segment like the rest of the outline. Also, the bird is not quite centered over the wordmark now. Again, very minor. Also, I can't quite place what needs tweaking on the beak, but I think there is something that can be done. I don't know, maybe the dividing line between the upper and lower beak should line up with the point of the gray "V" shape above it (assuming both are meant to separate the upper and lower beak). Otherwise I honestlly don't have a problem with this design.LT 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cyandlux 0 Posted September 13, 2005 bump update....rounder neck bottom 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mings 577 Posted September 13, 2005 Gettin closer, try getting rid of a color (the grey), it will increase contrast and flexibility of the logo. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
