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I finally got this one to the point where I won't change it. isles.jpg

most think it's an upgrade... but if the Isles aren't interested, oh wellllllllllllll...

I finally got this one to the point where I won't change it.

How nice for you...

Here's my $0.02

-the logo looks static, and thus boring

-for a team called the Islanders it's too sharp edged (which also clashes with the wavy stripes...

-I'd make the sleeve stripes consistent (you have 2 on one, & 3 on the other...)

On the plus side--no fisherman...

You basically kept the colours--although the blue is a bit close to purple...

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Here we go again...

- Logo's way too jagged, for starters.

- The "blue" is far too close to purple, as mentioned.

- Those waves don't match the straight stripes on the arms.

Sorry to say this, but this design is hardly an upgrade. But at least Long Island is no longer a shark...

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This could be good. But since you're not going to change it, here's what you should have asked yourself before calling this one finished:

1. The crest outline, the "NY"... why am I using black needlessly?

2. Straight lines everywhere around the shoulders... and then wavy lines at the waist - did I mean to be inconsistent?

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i personally love where its going

however the circle around the "C" absolutely has to go

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i personally love where its going

however the circle around the "C" absolutely has to go

it's supposed to be the copyright symbol...it has the year and his name right beside it.

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i personally love where its going

however the circle around the "C" absolutely has to go

it's supposed to be the copyright symbol...it has the year and his name right beside it.

Doesn't need it like that--it distracts from the concept!

(which actually...)

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Oh Gawd, NOT AGAIN. I hope this doesn't lead to the Capitals :cursing:

Why don't you shut up and critique it if you are gonna post here.

I actualy like the jersey concept. Maybe I wouldn't as much if it were on a player, but its nice to see the waves back.

The addition of black isn't needed in my opinion, and the blue could be a little lighter. (or more blue)

Otherwise I like it. Just like you said, a modernization.

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Oh Gawd, NOT AGAIN.  I hope this doesn't lead to the Capitals :cursing:

Why don't you shut up and critique it if you are gonna post here.

I actualy like the jersey concept. Maybe I wouldn't as much if it were on a player, but its nice to see the waves back.

The addition of black isn't needed in my opinion, and the blue could be a little lighter. (or more blue)

Otherwise I like it. Just like you said, a modernization.

no i'm not going to shut up. Know why? Because he's not asking for any C&C and the last time that went with this is because we went into the negative. I'm not saying it will, but you can't be too sure, now for some critique. I'm not too keen on the font you have, looks like you have too much gradients on the jersey, and i'd take the copyright logo you have off, looks too tacky.

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Oh Gawd, NOT AGAIN.  I hope this doesn't lead to the Capitals :cursing:

Why don't you shut up and critique it if you are gonna post here.

I actualy like the jersey concept. Maybe I wouldn't as much if it were on a player, but its nice to see the waves back.

The addition of black isn't needed in my opinion, and the blue could be a little lighter. (or more blue)

Otherwise I like it. Just like you said, a modernization.

no i'm not going to shut up. Know why? Because he's not asking for any C&C and the last time that went with this is because we went into the negative. I'm not saying it will, but you can't be too sure, now for some critique. I'm not too keen on the font you have, looks like you have too much gradients on the jersey, and i'd take the copyright logo you have off, looks too tacky.

Where's the gradiant?

Not to sound like an ass...actually wondering where it is.

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i've said this before, but i actually really like where the logo is going.

not a fan at all of the jerseys, and even less a fan of your template...

but this is your one logo that i think has potential...the rest of them do nothing for me, but this one could be something.

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the template is terrible!!! whats the silver supposed to be-- is that an outline around the white jersey or some kind up lining up the side?

the stripes and waves dont look good together at all. get some unity going. its all an eyesore.

does the bottom of the logo end in the curves of the wave or is it squared off?? you can't tell with this template at all.

for a "graphic designer" you'd think you'd be more meticulous in your logo design... but why on the white jersey is the "N" and 1/2 of the "Y" navy -- while the hockey stick is black? be more careful it looks like crap that way.

also the waves on the bottom of the blue jersey don't line up to the edge of the template? what are u doing here it looks thrown together in five minutes.

the logo itself is ok. the blue part of the logo on bottom doesn't look great on the blue jersey though. it kindof looks like an empty black circle there.

also why doesn't the circle connect on the right side of the logo between the forks of the haptons?

ALSO on a side note has anyone ever noticed that on the real islanders logo the tip of the "I" points right to where Nassau Coloseum is? i checked a bunch of maps and thats it... the map does not have brooklyn or queens on it so nassau coloseum is right there toward the west side of the logo.

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It looks like an "NY" over the Pepsi Logo.

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