Chief. Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 The first concept I ever posted on the boards was my own tweak of the Minnesota Wild logo and uniforms. Since the swift jersey template came out I decided to dig it up and make some new uniforms. In my original concept, the outline of the bear was light blue, but I decided to leave their original outline on this one. On the jerseys, I used some piping from the template just to try it out.Also, which logo looks better, the one on the top, or the one on the uniforms with a black outline?C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aerodynamix Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 It's different, and I kinda like it.But, I dunno, maybe it's me...but I'm used to the red-green-goldish (whatever the other color is).Wouldn't mind buying a jersey like that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pointguard4519 Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 I like these, but is there a reason the horizontal stripes don't go all the way around the arm? just wondering. I like the logo on the jersey better. i think if you just left the gold/sand color without the outline, it would look like it was lacking definition somewhat. the outline brings out the sand better IMO We are one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 this template is popular these days...anyways really not feelin the colors. sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phayze Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 The colors are my biggest gripe. I think it would help if you darkened the green, switched the cream to more of an old gold and maybe even changed the black to a midnight blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 If that's supposed to be a reflection, then it just doesn't work. Good try, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stadiumboy Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 sorry to say, terrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted February 24, 2006 Author Share Posted February 24, 2006 sorry to say, terrible And I'd like to see you do better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 sorry to say, terrible Don't be an hole. If you think it's terrible tell him what you would like to see done. It's called "constructive criticism". Try it. Until you learn to do it and contribute positively, take your 18 posts elsewhere. [end rant] "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gloobenberg Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 good stuff..i like it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 And I'd like to see you do better... That's a challenge stadiumboy, step up to the plate now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kroma Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 Not bad at all, but how about the home jersey black?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 I'm diggin' the new colors, and black jersey would pretty cool Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canucklehead Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 sorry, but the colours just don't mix whatsoever to me. it is an eyesore. the current colours mesh and make sense, while these kinda look like a negative. but i like the design. keep up the original ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spyboy1 Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 These are horrid. The colors the greenish color with the cream look terrible with the black and the template is an overly busy eyesore at best.There's nothing vibrant about the muted colors, and that combined with the nighttime theme of the logo makes it all downright depressing. JeffB Click here to read Third String Goalie - The Hockey Jersey of the Day Blog Click here to see my hockey and baseball jersey collection online ?You don?t like to see 20 kids punching 20 other kids. But it?s not a disgrace, It?s hockey.? - Michael Farber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 Okay, spyboy1, I can take constructive critisism, and I can take suggestions to improve the concept. But when someone uses words like "horrid" and "eyesore" and "downright depressing", it flusters me a little. Please just help out a little and give suggestions, that's why I posted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Color-wise, you've used some creative colors, but haven't used them creeatively. The colors seem to need something else to compliment them. I can see why you moved away from the red, but there should be a non-green non-yellow color thrown in there. The overall design is pretty busy, even considering the template. The same goes for the logo. With the darker color, it's easier to see that it's night, so you don't need to reinforce the night theme with the extra stars. Simplify the logo, simplify the striping on the jersey, add another color to balance the dark green and cream, and you've got something.I would suggest doing soemthing on a simpler template and seeing how it "translates" to the swift template, rather than starting with the swift. That might confine you to a simpler design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JQK Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 I'd make the dark jersey either black, or go with their original green and burgundy colors so that the bearhead sticks out more. It kinda gets lost in the jersey.Other than that, this is as good as the Nike swift jerseys can look (althoug that's not saying much) Stay Tuned Sports Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 He's got the black to go with the green and cream. I've had classes just on color, and what he has now works.I'm sure this is just a matter of personal taste. I've never had a class just on colors, but I have left soda cans out in my backyard for weeks on end, and that faded look is exactly what the teal and cream suggest. Even if the cream was changed to gold or a brighter yellow, it would be an improvement. I would keep the teal if it were me, but it could just as easily be changed to a more "proper" green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Okay, spyboy1, I can take constructive critisism, and I can take suggestions to improve the concept. But when someone uses words like "horrid" and "eyesore" and "downright depressing", it flusters me a little. Please just help out a little and give suggestions, that's why I posted it. i thought his post was pretty fair, actually...he basically says that all of your changes are downgrades from the original... to which i'll agree.not your fault. you took a chance, and to some of us, it didn't work out for you.not sure what kind of suggestions you want from him. juding by his reply, i say his suggestions are:1) change the colors to something less passive and muted.2) change the template to something less busy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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