cyandlux Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leopard88 Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Another good color scheme and logo. I especially like the "Kings" font. Two questions/comments, however:1. What is the actual name of the team? Are they the "Hawaiian Kings", without a city/state name (like the "MetroStars" or, to stay in the NFLE/WLAF mode, the "Scottish Claymores")? If so, then the name works. Otherwise, Hawaii Hawaiian Kings would be a mouthful.2. Either way, you have misspelled "Hawaiian" (the second A is missing). Again, good work. Most Liked Content of the Day -- February 15, 2017, August 21, 2017, August 22, 2017 ///// Proud Winner of the CCSLC Post of the Day Award -- April 8, 2008 Originator of the Upside Down Sarcasm Smilie -- November 1, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 I agree the colour scheme is nice--it fits the team as well.The logo almost seems to flow onto the helmet--which is nice too. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 You got this all wrong, cyandlux!1. You misspelled "Hawaiian" (spelled it as "Hawiian")2. You have "Hartford Mastodons" as the name of the concept! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 Oh, wow. update coming soon. I forgot the A after the W. This is the reason why I need my own interns. Mastodons coming soon, too!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 1, 2006 Author Share Posted March 1, 2006 bump the update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 2, 2006 Share Posted March 2, 2006 You got this all wrong, cyandlux!1. You misspelled "Hawaiian" (spelled it as "Hawiian")2. You have "Hartford Mastodons" as the name of the concept! I think the capacity needs another digit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted March 2, 2006 Share Posted March 2, 2006 nice, nice, nice...this is a great set...when you're done and you have them all to your liking, you need one final post with all of them togetheron the helmet, i'd make the black outline thicker or add a white outline around it to give the logo a bit more pop - wordmark and logo are very good and i love the way the warrior just fits right into the wordmark perfectly...great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 23, 2006 Author Share Posted March 23, 2006 bump....thickened the outline....thanks for ALL the suggestions!!!!!!Spring break 06 - I updated the WLAF2!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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