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cyandlux

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Nice work, but while I like that logo for a primary, I prefer profile logos on football helmets, not straight on.

Still that's a matter of taste, but profiles work better.

I'd also try to add some contrast between the helmet & logo--but otherwise good work.

I like the wordmark especially.

It might look good on the helmet--or a lynx profile.

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The head doesn't seem to flow right into the ear shape. The way they go together just doesn't look right.

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I'd also try to add some contrast between the helmet & logo--but otherwise good work.

i agree...i've said this about a couple of your concepts...on many of these the logo doesn't jump out on the helmet - make that white outline thicker and you've got yourself a winner - your wordmarks are a thing of beauty...really good stuff

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I'd also try to add some contrast between the helmet & logo--but otherwise good work.

i agree...i've said this about a couple of your concepts...on many of these the logo doesn't jump out on the helmet - make that white outline thicker and you've got yourself a winner - your wordmarks are a thing of beauty...really good stuff

I also agree. This is my only criticism of this one. I think part of the contrast problem may arise because the eyes and mouth are the same color as the shell (as was the case with the Hong Kong concept).

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