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The team name is near illegible and the 'cudas face needs some work. The mouth looks like two separate pieces. You are off to a great start, but this one needs some cleaning up.

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the barrcuda doesn't look smooth enough. it's hard to describe, but it almost looks like it is in several pieces. I don't really like how you mixed a classicish template (circle logo, ball in center, logo over baseball, city name in the circle) with the modern, graffiti-ish wordmark (barracudas). I think this is a good start though.

Do you plan on doing jerseys? Because I would like to see them

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The colors and logo are a little too Seattle Mariners. It's an object (teal and silver) in front of a ball. That's Seattle's logo.

I agree that the barracuda doesn't look quite right. It does look very jagged. Like a 1990s Microsoft Office clipart image.

But it's a good rough draft. Now you just need to chisel a little more.

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Font is almost unreadable and the Barracuda looks upside down.

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Yeah, I really couldn't tell what this was if you didn;t say so in the topic description. The font has to go and I think I speak for everyone when I say that. I don't know how to put it but the Barracuda looks kind of off, a good start but it needs some cleaning up.

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