TFoA Posted June 5, 2006 Posted June 5, 2006 Well, I've made my first concept in months. And, of course, it's for a fantasy league. The funny thing is, I'm not even in it yet, it's for my application to join the MLF. (I wanna put an I inbetween the M and L so bad...) It's the Mississippi RiverWarriors, but it's like the names TrailBlazers and SuperSonics, so it can be Mississippi Warriors as well. Anyways, here's the concept, w/o a primary logo (I was thinking something along the lines of a Native American/Chief)C&C would be greatly appreciated, y'all. (And keep in mind I use MGI Photosuite, which is basically MS Paint 2.0...lol)
eRay Posted June 5, 2006 Posted June 5, 2006 these jerseys actually look really good IMO, but the 2 helmets confuse me. choose one and i'm fine with it. i say go with the black one, but use the W sign, not the M. make the top of the socks on the white jersey another color, black doesnt work for me. other than that, it looks good. the colors and color use is great
quantum Posted June 5, 2006 Posted June 5, 2006 I like the color combo. I also like the striping and the use of the colors in the set. However, the logo on the silver(?) helmet kinda looks like an extracted molar. I think with a little tweaking, the W will work better. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity".
TFoA Posted June 22, 2006 Author Posted June 22, 2006 Bump, because I finally made a primary logo and changed the gold up a little. C&C Please.LogosPackage
Gary Posted June 23, 2006 Posted June 23, 2006 I think the secondary is better off on the helmet than the Primary
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