FSU Men's Soccer

[Geoff]

Here's what I thought up:

Dark:

White:

They are both a a combobnaiton of about 8 ideas each. The white's piping changed 13 times. The extremely light grey on the back is supposed to be mesh white. The garnet stripe was a last minute thing I added and it seems to work well.

C&C, please.

EDIT:

Dark w/ shorter spear

Dark reverse of the white

Dark sans Chief Osceola and number box

White w/ thicker sash

[VitaminD]

Like 'em.

One suggestion: find the FSU athletic font - what they use for football and basketball numbers. It'd tie this in to the school much, much better.

The garnet jersey is a little cluttered, with the spear, Chief Osceola, the swoosh and the number in a box. I'd dump the Chief - the spear is well-done and identifies FSU well enough. I'd also get rid of the box - the number is already double-outlined.

The white jersey is nice. I like that this one isn't a copy of the garnet with colors reorganized. I would make the garnet sash a little thicker to accommodate larger numbers.

This would work.

[Geoff]

Bump. Added links to all the updates. I took C&C from other people as well as Vitamin D.

[Geoff]

C&C, please.

[patsox]

I still like the first two the best.