gordie_delini Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 These are two preliminary designs for the Primary/Helmet logo. C&C appreciated and welcomed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camden Crazy Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 It looks great, but I'd probably put a cowboy hat on the skull also. While this logo does represent "bandit" to me, it might not to other people. Of the two here, IMO the 2nd is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 As of right now, I see it as a secondary logo. I'd like to see it as part of a uniform set to see how well it works. Aside from that, I like the logo. Well done, although the skull and bandana thing seems to have been used quite a bit in recent years. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 #2. The "pink" on the mask should be white IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigdub81 Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 I don't think it was intended to be pink but rather a highlight of the mask. The red was possibly made lighter almost a pink to achieve this look. Good Job! Here ya' go I thought about this and made it up right quick. I hope you don't mind me posting this but I wanted to see if this would work for you. I used the ragged ends of the rag to shape the letters "T'' and "B'' for Tampa Bay, to incorporate it into the design. If you want, clean it up and use it in your concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 wow Brian, nice work on this. If you want to put a hat on it, I dont mind, just as long as it isnt a typical pirate hat. By the way, number 2 is the one I'd choose.To let everyone know, I wanted a pirate theme with this to embody a bandit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike2sana Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 if your gonna use a hat use this type ATL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hat Boy Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 if your gonna use a hat use this typenah, make the hat look like this. Nothing says "bandit" quite like a propellar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Those logos looks really good. I'm not sure which one I'd go with. I like the 1st, but I think the 2nd would stand out more with the shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Keep moving in the direction of your second piece. Notice how much bolder and stronger the black shadows are. Now, lets think about this for a second. Are skulls and cloth bandanas shiny? No, and thus the highlights are unneeded. All they do is add unnecessary colors and detract from the simplicity and elegance of the marks. I'm also not sure about the point that forms the eyebrow of the far socket. It's an attention hog because it looks so strange. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilliesPhan1325 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 They are both good logos, but I'd go with the second one. The black helps it stand out more than the first. I would agree on adding a hat, to make it look more "Bandit-ish". "The 0-2 pitch... SWING AND A MISS! STRUCK HIM OUT! THE PHILADELPHIA PHILLIES ARE 2008 WORLD CHAMPIONS OF BASEBALL!" J M yoU wish you had a Duke Dog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 Well I think I may end up tweaking this altogether, since Garrett wanted a pirate theme. As for the shadows on the skull, I took those directly off of a reference photo, so the one you were questioning Andrew was how it was like in the photo. Anyway, I'll post just the skull so far, then updates when I have more of a pirate theme going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Brian, if you want to go with a hybrid pirate/western bandit thats fine with me. Maybe a hat similar to what the 'Bucco Bruce' logo had. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Brian, if you want to go with a hybrid pirate/western bandit thats fine with me. Maybe a hat similar to what the 'Bucco Bruce' logo had. More bandanas and puffy shirts, please. Anyone up for a musical? "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 I see a TB in the skull, did you mean to put it there, cause it looks cool. And IMO, I like the second logo better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1stDownCreative Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 super nice start...agreed second one...try this...use second one, take away highlights on both, take all of the skulls darl shading in the back and make it all black, take away the shadows in the front of the skull.so now there should be only 3 colors, red-eggshell-black. thicken the black areas that are a little thin (where the bandana is on the face around the eyes)as i always say, might not work, but should give you ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 it looks great so far, also I would get rid of the shadows on the skull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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