patsox Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 C+C? Lay it on me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Well, I've certainly been surprised before, but this ranks right up there. Not only does it look relatively clean, but it also looks like there's been some thought put into the design. Why can't all your concepts reach this level?My only gripe is the gratuitous addition of red to color scheme. If you don't see it anywhere in the logo, it shouldn't be anywhere in the trim of the signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Now THAT'S 100%, Brian. I agree with Mosey about the use of red, but because it is far and above anything else you have ever done, I can overlook that. I am not going to request any, but I'm definitely interested in seeing the rest when you get to them. By George, I think he's got it. So don't post any more slop, okay. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 4, 2006 Author Share Posted July 4, 2006 Lets make more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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29a Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 You did a better job on the Jays one. It's a lot cleaner whereas the O's and Sox ones look a little rough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arr1023 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 these look nice keep tryin to mess around with them till you perfect them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Your best work so far. The last 2 look a little sloppy, but near as bad as your other stuff. Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MrAsterisk Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 You might want to include the exploding part of the exploding scoreboard for the White Sox as opposed to the completely ambiguous bottom half and surrounding advertisements.Nice work on the O's and Jays (except for the red), but the pair of Sox look as though you're back to your old ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uniguy22 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 I'll admit these are pretty good. But don't try to do them all at once, take your time and make them all as good as the jays one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Wow, must be the best work I've seen you do here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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fonz Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Your jays one is good. Others are right, no need for red. You've got a nice layout, but again, be careful with your slopiness. Don't worry about rushing to get them all done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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uniguy22 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 That twins one is really bad. The twins script ooks choppy, The TC isn't the right colour, you have white spots randomly appearing in the red, and you metrodome image is very blurry. We know you are capable of making these good, so try to with every single one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snetsrak43 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Most of these are great, but every couple you post seam to get some minor sloppyness errors. Nothing compared to before but little marks here and there. Nice idea and for the most part nice execution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Look, I know you don't ever pay any attention to C&C, but dude these have plummeted in quality. The Jays one was stellar ('cept for the red). The feedback your received must have went to your head because none of the rest look as good as your first one. Quite frankly, you've completely reverted back to your normal sloppy, no-attention-to-detail, let-me-see-how-many-5-minute-concepts-I-can-do style. Other than the Jays one...you need to scrap 'em and start over. That Boston one is truly horrendous and the others aren't much better. Honestly, I'm beginning to question if you even did the Jays one. Nothing you've ever done touches it and you can't even recreate it's quality once. So go to whomever you got that one from and see if he'll do the rest of the teams. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 That twins one is really bad. The twins script ooks choppy, The TC isn't the right colour, you have white spots randomly appearing in the red, and you metrodome image is very blurry. We know you are capable of making these good, so try to with every single one. Yeah, and all of these have totalyl took a plunge like jigga said. And patsox, try and actually read and klisten to the CC given, most of these guys know what they're talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Look, I know you don't ever pay any attention to C&C, but dude these have plummeted in quality. The Jays one was stellar ('cept for the red). The feedback your received must have went to your head because none of the rest look as good as your first one. Quite frankly, you've completely reverted back to your normal sloppy, no-attention-to-detail, let-me-see-how-many-5-minute-concepts-I-can-do style. Other than the Jays one...you need to scrap 'em and start over. That Boston one is truly horrendous and the others aren't much better. Honestly, I'm beginning to question if you even did the Jays one. Nothing you've ever done touches it and you can't even recreate it's quality once. So go to whomever you got that one from and see if he'll do the rest of the teams. I wouldn't be surprised if that's the case. If there wasn't any red, I might actually consider using that Jays one, but the rest have all gone way downhill. Take your time, man. Usually people are patient when they request a sig so don't feel rushed. Take a few days if you have to. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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