BrianVlietDesign Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 A new concept for my WHA Megatooths. C&C please. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 It's alright. I think the "teeth" on the jersey take away from the rest of the design. I know you meant to put it in the concept but it's distracting. I also think you should move the name and number farther up th e jersey on the back. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 I'd consider changing up the colour scheme. The baby blue and green don't really work together. I'd also change the font for the names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 I'd consider changing up the colour scheme. The baby blue and green don't really work together. I'd also change the font for the names. where do you see green? NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 I see it now. I think he means on the numbers, where there is the grey outline, it's touching the powderblue, it kind of looks green. I think that's what he means.That or his monitor's f***ed up. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 I see it now. I think he means on the numbers, where there is the grey outline, it's touching the powderblue, it kind of looks green. I think that's what he means.That or his monitor's f***ed up. Ooohhh, I see now. That is gray though. But you're right, it does look green Fonz. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 Im not really felling the colors first theres to many and second I dont think they wrok very well toghteher. Also the name is unledgeable and the numbers dont really go with the jersey IMO. I think getting rid of the spikes on the top of the jersey would look better aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
molsonck54 Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentNoise Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 Sorry man, but I'm just not feeling it.IMO, the font used for the name should either stand out a little more or be changed altogether. I can definitely see where you were trying to go with it though.While I'm not a big of the spikes/teeth, how about maybe changing the color of them to the same grey that you elsewhere? I'm thinking that the 4 different colors make it almost a little too "busy" I guess the word would be, and maybe bringing it back to three would remedy some of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 Sorry man, but I'm just not feeling it.IMO, the font used for the name should either stand out a little more or be changed altogether. I can definitely see where you were trying to go with it though.While I'm not a big of the spikes/teeth, how about maybe changing the color of them to the same grey that you elsewhere? I'm thinking that the 4 different colors make it almost a little too "busy" I guess the word would be, and maybe bringing it back to three would remedy some of that. I like your ideas. I'm gonna put it to some use. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puckguy14 Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 The Teeth remind me of the old Oceanic jerseys 2004 San Jose Sharks 7th Man Fan of the Year San Jose Gold Miners - 4x Lombardi Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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