commander cody13 Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Here is my VERY FIRST logo everI know it's not that good but for my first try i'am satisfiedC&C welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike2025 Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 That's really good for your first try. Excellent job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Here is my VERY FIRST logo everI know it's not that good but for my first try i'am satisfiedC&C welcome it's good for your first shot. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 Thanks guys how can i make it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Thanks guys how can i make it better Make the blue jay actually gripping the stick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Thanks guys how can i make it better Make the blue jay actually gripping the stick. I second that and maybe make the eye more fierce NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 how should i do that??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 put his feet around the hockey stick like its holding it. IMO though you should get rid of the stick. BTW this would be a really good baseball logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 any ideas on how to make it look fierce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 any ideas on how to make it look fierce Make it lean forward.This looks passive--leanong forward shows agression. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 A great start. I think it is fine without any added fierceness, although if you want to toughen him up that is fine too. My simple suggestion is to extend the bottom curve of the wing into the body so it appears the wing comes out from the side as its supposed to. Also, consider thickening the outlines around the bird. Don't be afraid to be bold with your linework LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 5, 2006 Author Share Posted August 5, 2006 I completly re-did it taking some of your tipsI kept the stick cause it looks better with itIt came out a bit blockey when I uploaded it though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 a little bit off topic, but your last name doesn't happen to be Carlson, does it? cus that man was the beginning of the Houston Oilers' end we'd still have the Houston Oilers if they'd kept Moon (and I wouldn't have had the conflict of interest of one of my favorite QBs playing for one of my most hated teams)back on topic, that second one's real good for the second shot. shoot, if I only had paint I would suck. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 5, 2006 Author Share Posted August 5, 2006 haha no it's not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 i wouldn't mind vectorizing this to see how it could come out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted August 5, 2006 Author Share Posted August 5, 2006 whats vectorizing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 It's a huge improvement but don't make the eyes circles if you want him fierce, right now it looks like he's trying to figure out what a hockey stick is. Not a great image for your team.Make it look like he's squinting more and I wouldn't change any thing else.Although it might not hurt for you to move his head up so it dosen't look like he's pecking at the stick.Great first try though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 You don't see to many bluejay logos around - for any sport.Lots of Cardinals = but few bluejays. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted August 5, 2006 Share Posted August 5, 2006 whats vectorizing What you have now is what's called a raster graphic. It is made up of pixels. A vector is a graphic that is made of shapes instead of little dots.Wow, this is very impressive for Paint. Although, I would suggest downloading Inkscape. It is a free vector drawing program, like Adobe Illustrator (without some of the bells and whistles, but it gets the job done.) Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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