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Bluejays Logo

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Here is my VERY FIRST logo ever

I know it's not that good but for my first try i'am satisfied

C&C welcome

it's good for your first shot.

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Thanks guys how can i make it better

Make the blue jay actually gripping the stick.

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Thanks guys how can i make it better

Make the blue jay actually gripping the stick.

I second that and maybe make the eye more fierce

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put his feet around the hockey stick like its holding it. IMO though you should get rid of the stick. BTW this would be a really good baseball logo

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any ideas on how to make it look fierce

Make it lean forward.

This looks passive--leanong forward shows agression.

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A great start. I think it is fine without any added fierceness, although if you want to toughen him up that is fine too. My simple suggestion is to extend the bottom curve of the wing into the body so it appears the wing comes out from the side as its supposed to. Also, consider thickening the outlines around the bird. Don't be afraid to be bold with your linework :wink2:

LT

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a little bit off topic, but your last name doesn't happen to be Carlson, does it? cus that man was the beginning of the Houston Oilers' end :cursing: we'd still have the Houston Oilers if they'd kept Moon (and I wouldn't have had the conflict of interest of one of my favorite QBs playing for one of my most hated teams)

back on topic, that second one's real good for the second shot. shoot, if I only had paint I would suck.

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i wouldn't mind vectorizing this to see how it could come out.

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It's a huge improvement but don't make the eyes circles if you want him fierce, right now it looks like he's trying to figure out what a hockey stick is. Not a great image for your team.

Make it look like he's squinting more and I wouldn't change any thing else.

Although it might not hurt for you to move his head up so it dosen't look like he's pecking at the stick.

Great first try though.

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You don't see to many bluejay logos around - for any sport.

Lots of Cardinals = but few bluejays.

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whats vectorizing

What you have now is what's called a raster graphic. It is made up of pixels. A vector is a graphic that is made of shapes instead of little dots.

Wow, this is very impressive for Paint. Although, I would suggest downloading Inkscape. It is a free vector drawing program, like Adobe Illustrator (without some of the bells and whistles, but it gets the job done.)

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