Fairbanks Fury

[sideshowbob]

Hey guys, I made this for a fantasy hockey team, problem is, I don't have a fantasy hockey team. Anyway I was wondering what you guys think, C&C please.

[Lumbergh]

It's okay, but the bear doesn't really look like a bear.

[rcb05]

The bear needs some work. Also, on the two ovals behind the bear, think about making the outer curve with the inner one, instead of flaring out on the sides. Right now It kind of looks like the Oregon "O"

[Shumway]

I'm with miltonANDlumbergh on this'n. To improve the bear, here's what I noticed:

- The head seems to be too lean; it should be shorter and wider.

- The nose should be to the left a bit more, it's too close to the near side of the face. It looks like he has a broken snout.

- It could be the nose throwing me off, but it seems like the eyes wouldn't line up properly to create the perspective you want.

- Try to add some more shading/highlights

As for the jerseys/set as a whole:

- You're using three very dark colors, I'd try to lose one of them...I'd suggest keeping the green though. On the away, there is not black, and it's a bit better IMO. On the home, you could probably substitute wither the brown or the black with white.

- I'd put the Alaska shape on both shoulders and move the 88's down on where they traditionally are on a hockey jersey.

- The "Fury" and "Fairbanks" on the logo don't follow the edge of the oval exactly. It doesn't bother me, I just noticed it and thought I'd point it out.

Good start. With some tweaking, I think this shows some great potential.

[sideshowbob]

thanks for the critique guys, this was probably a stupid time to post, I totally forgot im going to be away from my computer for a while, I'll try to work on it when i get back though, thanks

[nwtrailtrekker]

thyre right, the bear head needs to be much fatter. tons of fur and stuff everywhere.base it off vancouver grizzlies for inspiration, not the best example but still good

[BostonBlazer]

Are there going to be designs to the backs of the jerseys?