Jimmy! Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 I need help.This is a combination NCFA football concept and college assignment. It's got a good foundation, but I'm not sold on the capitol building in the background (it looks like a baby bottle), and I'm not sure where to take this concept at this point.C & C welcome, and much appreciated. "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Try outlining the whole thing in black or a secondary colour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted August 19, 2006 Author Share Posted August 19, 2006 Thanks. I'll give it a shot. "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 I need help.This is a combination NCFA football concept and college assignment. It's got a good foundation, but I'm not sold on the capitol building in the background (it looks like a baby bottle), and I'm not sure where to take this concept at this point.C & C welcome, and much appreciated. wow! cool! i like! good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 I'd suggest depicting the actual Massachusetts State House dome in your logo, rather than the generic capitol dome you're now utilizing. For instance, the Massachusetts State House dome isn't segmented as depicted in your logo, nor does it feature the circles that you've used in your logo.Also, given the fact that the Massachusetts State House's copper dome has been distinctively covered with gold leaf since 1874, you may well want to tweak your team's color scheme to include Gold. At the very least, given the dome's prominence in your logo, I'd include Gold in the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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