LEWJ Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 OK I know i have started a concpt series already, I think I can do better...... So first off is the cardinals, with minor changes..... Addition of Gold/Yellow....New Helmet...... I like it, do U???C&C Please | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Botiger Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I like it a lot. The helmet striping reminds me of a little bit of Louisville but it's a lot better than their current. I really like the yellow trim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 check-plus my freind.not much done but in this case its not a bad thing. good use of paint(others take note) ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 i really like the addition of the gold. The players name could probably be bigger, but other than that great job. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 dont even touch the helmet. the current cards helmet is perfect (only better is if you change the facemask to white).but the unis do look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 22, 2006 Author Share Posted August 22, 2006 Next The Baltimore Ravens........Another tweakThe pants are inter-ChangableI added stripes to the rarely-used black pantsI added a pair of purple pantsChanged helmet stripes to match pantschanged socksChanged facemask coloradded ore color to black uniadded more trim to all jerseysC&C Please | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 BUMP | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 On the Cards, the yellow on the unis looks fine, but PLEASE get rid of the white armpits. They make no sense and just look stupid and busy. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Alright, my favorite one yet.....The BillsAll I have to say is it's a complete over-haul.....I hope You like it.... A lot of Retro. Pants are inter-ChangableC&C Please | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Alright, my favorite one yet.....The BillsAll I have to say is it's a complete over-haul.....I hope You like it.... A lot of Retro. Pants are inter-ChangableC&C Please OK the base look for the jersey is, i htink, near perfection...But what I would do pureley for presentation look is to add the NFL Equip logo on the collar, add the small wordmark ofer the numbers, and add a logo on the pants. 3 quick changes that i think would make it look less generic. (Been done alot, but i think a white shell with current logo looks great too)) ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Alright I fixed it to nyy's "requests" | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Alright I fixed it to nyy's "requests" creamy goodness....the only thing i would look into changing are the socks, and possibly the numbers (instead of say blue #/red outline, try blue#/white/red)As is: 8.5/10 ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Next Bengals:1. I made an arch on the home jersey to match the road2. I Switched the white side panel to a tiger striped side panel3. I made the sleeves on the orange jersey orange also so they look more like tiger stripes (black on orange) instead of crap (orange on black)Pants are inter-changableThats about itC&C Please | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Next Bengals:1. I made an arch on the home jersey to match the road2. I Switched the white side panel to a tiger striped side panel3. I made the sleeves on the orange jersey orange also so they look more like tiger stripes (black on orange) instead of crap (orange on black)Pants are inter-changableThats about itC&C Please i like it, the only suggestion i would make is to add a white or black arch to the alternate, just for consistency, but i'm not sure how it would end up looking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJR118 Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Alright, my favorite one yet.....The BillsAll I have to say is it's a complete over-haul.....I hope You like it.... A lot of Retro. Pants are inter-ChangableC&C Please i like it, but sorta makes me think of what would happen if you combined patriots and giants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 So far, I am liking this series.ARIZONA: I like the addition of gold. Good idea. Not thrilled with the helmet striping; sometimes less is more. Adding gold was a step in the right direction.ATLANTA: OOPS... BALTIMORE: Other than the all-black set, this is nice. Again, not crazy about the helmet striping - the Ravens use a large helmet logo, and the stripes are a little crowding. The black pants with the purple jerseys might look good as well.BUFFALO: Yup! I can't see the Bills going with a red jersey, even as an alternate - especially with so many people wanting to see their division rival in red alts. I would also dump the red pants altogether - the royal blue is what I would associate with Bills historically. Either helmet would work; I prefer the red one. Thanks much for the Champion numbers.CINCINNATI: A little too much on the jerseys - especially the black one. With orange helmets, AND orange shoulders, that's murder on the eyes. The white jerseys are bordering on looking like the illegal and ill-fated "bib" design that BYU tried a few years back. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tBBP Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 A definite YES on the Bullalo set. And good looks on reviving the Champion numerals! Like VitaminD said, don't really think the red pants are necessary. The only other thing I'd do is maybe adjust the sock striping so that it doesn't start all the way up at the top. Other than that--THAT is the Buffalo Bills, classic. (But then, they also lost 4 straight Super Bowls in those too, so...)'Zona: not entirely sold. I do believe the Cards can find a way to incoporate the yellow into their set somehow, since it IS in the logo, not to mention one of the colors of Arizona's state flag. (I kinda wish they still used that shade of blue they used to use as a trim back in the day but...oh well) 'Natti: a little too much going on. I truthfully don't know why they feel the need for different-colored shoulders on the roadies, but this is one of those things that could go either way, really. That said, the way you did yours, speaking from a design standpoint, is actually really good. (Tiger-striping of any kind ain't easy to replicate, so good job on that one.)By the way, I been meaning to e-mail you those templates you asked me about. Next time I get into my illustrator files at school Imma try to remember to do that. *Disclaimer: I am not an authoritative expert on stuff...I just do a lot of reading and research and keep in close connect with a bunch of people who are authoritative experts on stuff. || dribbble || Behance || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 A definite YES on the Bullalo set. And good looks on reviving the Champion numerals! Like VitaminD said, don't really think the red pants are necessary. The only other thing I'd do is maybe adjust the sock striping so that it doesn't start all the way up at the top. Other than that--THAT is the Buffalo Bills, classic. (But then, they also lost 4 straight Super Bowls in those too, so...)'Zona: not entirely sold. I do believe the Cards can find a way to incoporate the yellow into their set somehow, since it IS in the logo, not to mention one of the colors of Arizona's state flag. (I kinda wish they still used that shade of blue they used to use as a trim back in the day but...oh well) 'Natti: a little too much going on. I truthfully don't know why they feel the need for different-colored shoulders on the roadies, but this is one of those things that could go either way, really. That said, the way you did yours, speaking from a design standpoint, is actually really good. (Tiger-striping of any kind ain't easy to replicate, so good job on that one.)By the way, I been meaning to e-mail you those templates you asked me about. Next time I get into my illustrator files at school Imma try to remember to do that. Alright thanks I appreciate it. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 Next: BrownsTook away the AL patch, its about time toAdded the orange pants and jersey once again(Solid sox may be used on other jerseys. Pants are interchangable, Overkill special: orange on orange on orange)Brownie logo is backC&C Please(EDIT: forgot shoulder #s) | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted August 24, 2006 Author Share Posted August 24, 2006 Next: CowboysPretty Much a complete overhaulStaubach #sDiff StripingONE color SILVERHope U like,C&C Please | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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