Ogres Football

[33hooligan]

Likes or dis likes..c&c

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h217/33HOOLIGAN/Ogrecopy.jpg]My Webpage

[nwtrailtrekker]

haha wow i actually like it. alot. makes me laugh!

good job!

[Lumbergh]

I like this some bit, but it's really busy. The ogre is hard to see, and the font is absolutley not working at all here. There's a lot of work to be done, but keep going at it. BTW, on all your images there is that strange url thing in the post. To post images correctly, copy the image address, then hit the IMG tab above in the code buttons, and paste the address in the bar that pops up, then hit okay.

[33hooligan]

Thanks for the advice M&D. I'll try some other Fonts for Ogres.

This is what I get when I post in Img code button.

It also says, Sorry, dynamic pages in the tags are not allowed.

I don't get it.

[capn89]

I LOVE it. The wordmark is really nice and the helmet is ridiculously awesome. The main logo may be a little busy, as someone else suggested, but I like it.

[sideshowbob]

I love it, I think the horn on the helmet was a good idea, awesome job

[fonz]

The logo is far too detailed.

[sean69]

Coming from someone who likes the Ducks logo, I guess this logo would be too detailed.

I like it, very original, great job 33hooligan!

[statebully]

that's creative and cool! great job!

[ucnu112]

This is what I get when I post in Img code button. It also says, Sorry, dynamic pages in the tags are not allowed. I don't get it.

In photobucket, just copy the 3rd line of code for the images and paste it into the text box here on the forums. It already has the IMG tags built into it.

If you want to use the IMG button on here, copy and paste the first line of photobucket code.

[wcgslacker04]

Nice set.. but I prefer this... haha

[33hooligan]

Revised with some new ideas.

[slapshot]

You spelled Ogres differently.

The face needs a little more contrast...lighten up the medium green, or use the lighter green in place of it. I think you could rework this with just 2 shades of green instead of 3, because you show enough depth with the dark green as the shadows. Otherwise, use black for the shadows, and use the darker green for the body color.

[BostonBlazer]

That is so cool. It's an awesome logo overall. But the one thing I would change is the club the ogre has because it looks more like a baseball team's logo than it does a football team's.

[kewp80]

The ogre looks like he has hair coming out of his mouth. Sorry it just looks wierd to me.

[BrianVlietDesign]

Wow, thats solid.

[tBBP]

Noticed you spelled "Ogres" differently.

I think the horns on the helmet is the best. I was tempted to tell you to turn them around, but after studying your ogre along with Shrek, that's the right way to have them. Loving that.

To echo whoever said go with just two greens...count me along with that. This is one of those packages in which green and green not only could work together, but, with the right tweaks, WILL work together.

Then I noticed the horned "O". That would be an excellent tertiaty logo. Just find a way to make the horns look like they are actually growing out of the "O" instead of just pasting it on top of it. And if you were to make a uniform package for this, would you go with brown or black as your trim? Methinks the black would look best, but I'd try both anyway, just to see. Experiment.

And I think the Romulan Falcon font here works pretty good, if that's the typeface you're using. (On that note, for anyone who cares, the real version of DaFont.com's Romulan Falcon is called Totally Gothic--it's what my beloved Buccos use.)

Overall, excellent package. OH--and one more thing: I too think the club lends itself more to baseball than to football. And lose the hair. Ain't liking that little bit too much.

But I AM interested in seeing where this goes!

[33hooligan]

Changed up the logo a bit and made it for possible use in other sports.

Here is my B Ball concept.

C&C please

[slapshot]

It's getting there. The thick black outline really overpowers some of the thinner outlines and finer details around the horns and face. The contrast is much better around the neck and chest, but if I squint, much of the detail in the face is lost, especially the brow and nostrils.

The fangs look like they're placed there rather than part of the underbite of the jaw. I think if more of the upper lip was obscured it would feel more like fangs and less like things just sticking out of the mouth.

As an illustration, this is excellent. As a logo, it still needs stronger definition of the features, and maybe a little less detail. And increase the thickness of the outlines around the horns so they're more consistent with the rest of the logo.

[Brendan]

I think you should get rid of the horns on the wordmark. It just seems way to busy for me. The fangs are the thing that are really bugging me though i dont know what it is they just look weird.