averyj Posted September 23, 2006 Share Posted September 23, 2006 Here it is:whaddya think?as always C&C is appreciated. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted September 23, 2006 Share Posted September 23, 2006 You're sure a white logo on a white jersey is a good idea? facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted September 23, 2006 Author Share Posted September 23, 2006 yeah, forgot about that, I'll do a quick edit.EDIT:here we go..EDIT: (Again)for those you with vision problems, I've made a larger one in the chris creamer format/ templateEDIT: (for the third time)Also, I've been getting some complaints about the watermark, so I've toned it down. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnWis97 Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I like that jersey. Simple and classic. I think they need to get the loopy "W" off of their hat, though (as many here say) because it does not match their look at all.Solid effort. BTW--Am I wrong or does the small picture show a left sleeve patch? What is that? Disclaimer: If this comment is about an NBA uniform from 2017-2018 or later, do not constitute a lack of acknowledgement of the corporate logo to mean anything other than "the corporate logo is terrible and makes the uniform significantly worse." Â BADGERS TWINS VIKINGS TIMBERWOLVES WILD POTD (Shared) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oakland ehs Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 you donm't need to watermark your concepts that hardcore... its not too likely to get stolen. ruins the quality of the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maz Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 keep the "loopy W".Its the only good thing about their current set IMO.Also, your wordmark is very distracting, try toning it down a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anomalied Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I really like it. And like someone else said, relax with the watermarks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Make the hat solid navy with maybe a red W. Right now it looks too much like the Braves, as well as, for some reason, I just never thought contrasting crown/brim hats ever looked good with pinstripes. I always thought solid color ones looked better. Hmm. That's just me, though. Plus, making the W red helps it match better with the lettering on the jersey (the way the hat looks now does match with red lettering on the jersey, but see my previous statements.) Or maybe change the DC to navy and leave the number red, or vice versa. Whatever you do, I do see a lot of promise in this. It's really not such a bad idea. But DO tone down that watermark a bit. Peace. Word. Â Â https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJWAY Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 jesus who is going to steal your work... you put a cap logo on a pinstriped jersey... its a good concept if i was able to see it Lets Go RangersMy Website I dont really care if it sucks www.freewebs.com/jjway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 jesus who is going to steal your work... you put a cap logo on a pinstriped jersey... its a good concept if i was able to see it He has a point but its not that serious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 jesus who is going to steal your work... you put a cap logo on a pinstriped jersey... its a good concept if i was able to see it Take notice of his attention to detail, watermark aside. Looks better than YOUR stuff. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maz Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 also, its a good idea to save in png. saving in jpg messes up the quality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baseballking99 Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I would change the hat because It really does look like the Braves too much. Also move the numbers up on the jersy so they're level with the DC logo. Otherwise it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 okay, I'm working on it right now.EDIT:Here it is, tell me if I forgot something.... You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rachel Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Also move the numbers up on the jersy so they're level with the DC logo. Otherwise it looks pretty good. I'll have to disagree, I think I like the numbers on the lower part of the jersey better. That's just my opinion though. Everything looks great. The only thing I don't like (for some reason) is the blue sock with the red belt. Just my opinion. Nice work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Yeah, i forgot. You need to make the belt navy. Lookin better though. Â Â https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 okay working on it.I'm split between numbers down or numbers up.EDIT:Here we go... You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJTALBOT Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Very nice rendering of a Twins alt jersey. Oh, it's the Nats. Nevermind. Everyone loves a roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJWAY Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 *** Lets Go RangersMy Website I dont really care if it sucks www.freewebs.com/jjway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 Very nice rendering of a Twins alt jersey. Oh, it's the Nats. Nevermind. What, just because they share a red white and blue color scheme, that makes them look like the twins?Twins Alternate:http://www.chriscreamer.com/logo.php?lo=5742Mine: I can agree they look similar, but I wasn't basing it on them. I wanted to go for a patriotic red white and blue approach, instead of just having red at home and blue on the road. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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