Jets return

[commander cody13]

This is my first jets concept

I made the logo on the shoulder out of a red circle which represents the sun and a jet from the old logo

C&C please

[steiny_ramone]

I've said this to many jersey concepts done by many people, and here it is again: Your jersey is having an identity crisis! The stripes on the hem don't match the stripes on the sleeves! Pick one style of striping and go with that. Personally, I'd like to see what you can do with the curved striping. The Jets had straight stripes pretty similar to use, IIRC.

If you decide to use the curved stripes, add an outline around them so that you have at least two colours.

[commander cody13]

your right thanks

Iam gonna change the hem striping and put a blue outline on the arm stripes

[capn89]

I second what steiny said. You can't just have color "patches" on jerseys because it doesn't really look right. You need some time of stripe/outline/accent. Keep working on it, I'd like to see where it goes.

[commander cody13]

iam working on the patches now

[commander cody13]

Theres the new ones

[speedy]

looks more like a team usa concept than a jets one

[commander cody13]

yeah thats what i was thinking

But i'am out of ideas on how to fix it

[steiny_ramone]

While it is very USA, I think it looks awesome.

A way to eliminate the USAness would be to make the hem stripes less wavy. There really only needs to be one curve. And then make it symmetrical(?).

[drevel]

Yeah, the stipes (waving) do look like a USA hockey concept. Maybe a old Jets logo going past the Bottom and the jets burnes make the stripes.

[Stampman]

I can't believe I'm saying this---but use less red--make blue the dominant colour on both jerseys.

[josh_cat_eyes]

Its good but the logo is too small. It also has no numbers.