commander cody13 Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 This is my first jets conceptI made the logo on the shoulder out of a red circle which represents the sun and a jet from the old logoC&C please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I've said this to many jersey concepts done by many people, and here it is again: Your jersey is having an identity crisis! The stripes on the hem don't match the stripes on the sleeves! Pick one style of striping and go with that. Personally, I'd like to see what you can do with the curved striping. The Jets had straight stripes pretty similar to use, IIRC.If you decide to use the curved stripes, add an outline around them so that you have at least two colours. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 your right thanksIam gonna change the hem striping and put a blue outline on the arm stripes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 I second what steiny said. You can't just have color "patches" on jerseys because it doesn't really look right. You need some time of stripe/outline/accent. Keep working on it, I'd like to see where it goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 iam working on the patches now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 Theres the new ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 looks more like a team usa concept than a jets one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander cody13 Posted September 24, 2006 Author Share Posted September 24, 2006 yeah thats what i was thinkingBut i'am out of ideas on how to fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 While it is very USA, I think it looks awesome.A way to eliminate the USAness would be to make the hem stripes less wavy. There really only needs to be one curve. And then make it symmetrical(?). facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted September 24, 2006 Share Posted September 24, 2006 Yeah, the stipes (waving) do look like a USA hockey concept. Maybe a old Jets logo going past the Bottom and the jets burnes make the stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted September 25, 2006 Share Posted September 25, 2006 I can't believe I'm saying this---but use less red--make blue the dominant colour on both jerseys. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted September 25, 2006 Share Posted September 25, 2006 Its good but the logo is too small. It also has no numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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