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Heres my two newest concepts

For the sharks one i mixed some old jersey into a new idea

For the sens the idea just popped into my head at school so when i came back i made this

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Whether it was intentional or not I like the dorsal fin image in the Sharks jerseys. But overall I think they lack that "spark".

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I love them both. The just need a little bit more to them. They look kinda boring but i see TONS of potential, especially with the sens one!!

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Yeah the dorsal fin was intentional but any thing i can do it to "spice it up"

Well on the dark jersey make the side panel grey. As it looks now it looks like a sweat stain. Perhaps adding a contrasting piping around the side panel. Nothing big just a few pixels pehaps black on both. Have fun with the sleave stripes make them look like waves. I don't think the stripes as the are now work with the modern look of the side panels.

For the Sens...first clean up the logo edges. I would make the jersey bottom stripe match the sleave pattern exactly, maybe even ad the jersey color to the center of the sleave striping.

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Put the laurel leaf pattern where the gold is. The pattern like they use on their current 3rd jersey and change the gold a little more yellow.

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You've taken the Sharks template and made it boring. Congratulations, never thought I'd see the day.

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One thing that I would recommend is to change the side panel of the home Sharks jersey to a color that contrasts with the jersey color more.

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You've taken the Sharks template and made it boring. Congratulations, never thought I'd see the day.

If you don't like it, and have no constructive critisism then don't post

Anyways heres the new jerseys

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I took most of your ideas into account and now they're done

C&C please

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You've taken the Sharks template and made it boring. Congratulations, never thought I'd see the day.

If you don't like it, and have no constructive critisism then don't post

Anyways heres the new jerseys

SHARKSHOME2.png

SHARKSAWAY3.png

SENSHOME2.png

SENSAWAY2.png

I took most of your ideas into account and now they're done

C&C please

What was meant by it is that you took one of the most interseting templates in the NHL and took away tons of it. You made it un-interesting, plain. I could tell that it once was the Sharks' template, just downgraded.

The latest version is a bit better. I'm not sure about the two shades of teal used on the home.

I think the laurel leafs are too foced on the Sens jerseys. They are squished at the bottom, and only appear on the hem, so they don't really go with the jersey. Try to incorporate them elsewhere.

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San Jose:

For the Sharks home jersey I'd recolor the dorsal fins on the teal jerseys to black with a thin white outline. On the white jerseys I'd keep the dorsals as they are but add a thin black out line on them.

Ottawa:

For both jerseys I would change the lower stripe on the bottom of the jerseys. I would remove the olive leaf patttern and replace it with a Greco-Roman pattern like the type seen as trim on Roman senator togas.

Greco-Roman Pattern

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Nice work. But you've just assured the Senators of continued decades of failure or possible extinction by using the over-the-shoulder-and-down-the-arm jersey design. I submit the futility of the Leafs and the moving of the Jets as proof.

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