TIGERSFAN92826 Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Here's a team I've been thinking of for quiet some time now. So here it is.Yes. I did create the logo too. C & C Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 + Colors+ Concept+ Cleanliness- Dragon lacks aggressiveness, it looks like it's coming up for air- Jersey number on back is too low and the name is too big- shoulder numbers blend in to shoulder panel- shoulder numbers in general; you should probably move them out to the sleeves and keep the panel blank.Other than that? It's not too bad. I'd wear the tweaked version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 none of the string really matches...the socks go green/white/blue/white/green, while the jersey's go green/blue/green, and the pants just go green.also, the stripes are a little low on the cuffs... it makes the sleeves look empty, and the cuffs won't be entirely visible, with certain types of gloves. (which is ok for teams that have cuff designs... but if the cuff design is the only sleeve design, it looks a bit plain) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 I only got to fix the stripes and the cuffs... I didn't feel like fixing the logo or names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 so what do u guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 I dont see much change. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 I dont see much change.I changed the stripes on the cuffs and the stripes on the socks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jOkeR Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 You should make the striping a little wider, it looks really thin. Good start. Lebanon Warrior Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 I would take the sleeve numbers out of the blue shoulder yoke area and put them on the white area between the yoke and the stripe. That's a more conventional placement, plus it will be a lot easier to read a green number on white than on blue.I'd also make the sleeve stripes thicker, as thick as the stripes on the socks.The nameplate font is still a bit too big, and the back number is still a bit too low. And the logo itself, even if you just tweaked the eye to make him look meaner, it would make a world of difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 It has a lot of the same flaws as your last concept. It's not bad, but it's really empty, the striping on the jersey doesn't match the striping on the socks, and the number font is not very good. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyersHockey1967 Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 I have to agree with officeglenn and steiny ramone, it really seems empty and the stripes are too thin. If you're going to make it that thin, I'd say space it out a bit like the Maple Leafs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 That's a dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 That's a dragon?That's constructive criticism? Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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