leggman01 Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 just playin' around and whipped this up...there really isn't such a team in any of my leagues - i'd like some c&c on how to improve it...thanks in advanceprimary w/ wordmarksecondary lettermark...i have to give credit here...someone did a copperheads logo a few months ago and formed a "c" out of the snake, and i borrowed the idea - sorry that i can't remember who it was, but thanks for the inspiration!edit - the new secondary will be a letter "c" with fangshelmetedit - deleted secondary and helmet...back to the drawing board Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-(dp)- Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 The eye seems to be at a wierd angle. The way the eye is shaped/angled makes it look like he is facing straight to the right, but his face and mouth are facing out towards us and to the right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 I can't wait for GMS to see your secondary logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 I can't wait for GMS to see your secondary logo.yeah..i just did a site search and found his...WOW...i can't believe exactly how close i got to that (although the original is MUCH better)i really liked what he did...obviously it stuck with megms...if you'd like me to take down the secondary and helmet, i'll gladly do so...didn't mean to blatantly rip your stufffor reference, here is the logo that "inspired" me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 I think for the most part, the problem you are having here with this logo is the same one I had when I designed the Cleveland Cobras logo...It looks kinda feminine and happy. Maybe sketch out a couple ideas and go with it.It is a very good start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 i've tinkered with the primary some...here are 2 optionsi'm leaning toward the first because it's not only more anatomically correct, the large expanse of yellow in the second seems boringhere is the "hooded c" lettermark...not sure it's quite right yet, but at least it isn't a complete rip-off helmetthoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-(dp)- Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 I am not sure if this will help, but I did it quick in paint. this is what I think can make it betterOkay, first, I think you should bring the right side of his nose in a little bit. (our right, not his right). The line to the left of that is just like a guide. That is about where the middle of his head would be. Using that, the eye is too high, and to far to the right. Bring it down and angle it more the way I have drawn the oval.(not necesarily in that shape, but you get the idea I hope.) Finally, bring the right edge of the lower part of his mouth over to the left a little bit. I'm not sure if this will help, but that is what I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 It's decent. I like both the first and second versions of the logo and actually wish you could find a happy medium because they each have their beauties and flaws. As for the helment, I think it looks really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 getting closer...primarysecondary...i returned to the first "cobra c" that i did, but executed it differently...it's still very much like the work that gms did on the copperheads logo, but i think it's now different enough to pass musterhelmetpnd - thanks for your help with the eye placement...definate improvement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 any more c&c or is this perfect now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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