GFB Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Most of my concepts have been taking teams back in their history, so I have decided to change things up a bit. This time I am taking the Cardinals forward to their next step.....For the logo, I tried to use the "Seahawk" method: keep the main points in tact, while creating a seamless design all the way through. Also, I decided to use the golden-yellow color as a more key part of the color design. I decided to keep the uniforms cleaner, as they are right now. Minor changes include the "St. Louis" script on the road, a thicker outline on the hats, and on the red Alt. and BP jerseys, the script is white, avoiding the red on red like it is now. I also made a custom font for the numbers, styled after the Cardinals script....C&C appreciated as always...GFB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
impulsive106 Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Those are insane (in a good way). I love how clean and sharp you've made their marks. The only slight qualm I have is with the numbers; they're a bit too revisionary, but they do sort of fit the shaping of the wordmarks, so it's minor. I love the B.P. uniform as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Actually it's a nice improvement - I like it a lot.I don't see where the "seahawking" look, guess I was thinking along the lines of a cardinal head like the seahawk bird. Still great job! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Very futureistic. I would tone down the yellow outlines abit or eliminate them all-together. I like it! "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bearcats Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Simply beautiful.Minor qualms: Wish the numbers were a little bit more simplistic, a tiny bit less yellow outlining to make it less overpowering, try a navy BP uni or alt.Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 besides the numbers these are awesome i would maybe add some piping to sleves to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 incredible!! awesome job New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceHawk447 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 The Seahawks did maintain a conventional number font on their jerseys...Returning to this concept, aside from the aforementioned #s, interesting update...tight stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Absolutely awesome work. I think this is an awesome update and I applaud at how clean and finished the concept looks. Incredibly well done, I would slightly slightly make the yellow outline of the bird and bat logo a thinner. Other than that, unreal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 The Cardinals in the logos are just about perfect. It's the best idea to keep the exact same look and just modernise it. Improuvments: just get rid of the yellow outline and stick to a more simplified number font.Overall, fantastic fantastic job. You should do the same thing with logos such as the the raiders, red sox, and the old sabres logo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowBoutThemFins Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 i like everything except for the numbers. good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 - yellow outline looks great, but maybe a tad thick.- number font really attracts a lot of attention, and IMO takes away from the concept. I'm not suggesting block (though that would be fine,) but tone it down.-The jerseys are screaming for sleeve trim. Otherwise they look like plain generic shirts with patches sewn on. The current uni's can get away with this, because there is white-space (or gray space) between the letters, so it looks like it is embroidered in, not just a patch.-Road and BP cap are terriffic. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Those numbers are wild, other than that it's awesome. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Very nice, just a few points:- Great use of yellow, just thin the outlines out a bit.- Might wanna change the 'St. Louis' script to blue on the aways for visibility's sake.- Numbers are cool, but rather hard to read. Might want to tone down the (I guess you could call them) serifs. Also, could we see the other 9 numerals?Very good update. A+ (and I hate the Cards! ) Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucaMaz3 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Very good, but just like others have said, the numbers should be a bit more simplistic (but I see what you are going for with the font) and the outline is a little too thick, but I still like it.This is a great job and a perfect update. A+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaftDu Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Very futureistic. I would tone down the yellow outlines abit or eliminate them all-together. I like it!/agreegreat job on tweaking an classic in a good way. I think i would agree about the yellow outline. Maybe a pt or two lower on bold size. It appears too thick but lowering the size a point or two you got it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 As a Modernization Concept, yeah this is great. Just a few things:-Cards' set should never include yellow anywhere except the beak of the birds, and the bat.-The numbers aren't legible enough. Maybe a different custom font, or keep the regular block.-That alt, way too much unnecessary Nike piping....Majestic does the baseball jerseys. -Outlines are too thick.I do, however, like the update of the birds. You didn't go all futuristic on them. You just changed the facial features a bit and their stance. They look a little more "cartoon" realistic, for lack of a better term, but they're not "cartoony", if that makes any sense. They're sweet, I'll just put it that way. Do I want them too change from what they have not, not really. But a lot of your features would be a welcome update down the road if they ever decide to. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Love it! The only thing I would look into doing is changing the number font to a more simple font. Great update overall though | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 the T on the tertiary logo is kinda got a little flawanyways...otherwise i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRM_PTX Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 These are so damn clean looking. Then I told that teacher lady the only three letters I need to know are U, S, and A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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