LimeGuy Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 Is this too simple?Critiques and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jOkeR Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 The jerseys look great, but the logo is kinda shabby. You have a great start so far. Lebanon Warrior Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I don't think it's too simple, but I also don't think it's attractive. The maroon looks very out of place and the number font is very poor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LimeGuy Posted December 13, 2006 Author Share Posted December 13, 2006 I will be adding a wrap-around banner/ribbon thing towards the bottom of the logo with the wordmark on it... I wasn't sure if I should do it, but it adds to the logo.Should the font be more square? Is there a font you might recommend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilgump Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I dont know about the font, but your pirate has a knife going through his head. I would just go with the skull, maybe have the sword/knife as a secondary. The World Basketball Championship, the Davis Cup, Ryder Cup, Iraq: Every day there's further proof that we, as a nation, are not very good at international competition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonBlazer Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 You should change the maroon to some other color, and use that color on the alt. jersey, perhaps as the main color of that uni.I also agree with Gump about the logo. Lose the dagger and use it in a secondary logo. http://www.reverbnation.com/richardyerardihttp://www.ahlfans.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LimeGuy Posted December 13, 2006 Author Share Posted December 13, 2006 Wish I'd have read that before I redid the logo. Ok, so ignore the logo for a bit... check this out:I like the dagger through the skull... the skull looks a little plain by itself, I think... which we can all take a look at on the helmet now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bucks6thMan Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 The maroon really does look out of place. Maybe try adding soome bewteen the white and silver on the numbers. Side panels should always "run into" the same color on the pants so try doing the silver pants with the silver sides or black pants with a silver side stripe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmered Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 How about if you made a second dagger, and crossed them, with the skull above them, forming a skull and crossed daggers look? A bit like this:Would be more pirate-ey.Also, the uniforms aren't bad, but I'd put the skull on the sleeves and the numbers on the shoulders.Do something to the otherwise plain Black.(Not tiger stripes mind you, just something a little understated)On the font, I don't know what it is, but it just doesn't seem to suit the pirate theme.I think it's because it's rounded, and has a balloon feel to it.Pirates, to me, remind me of thin ink pen script, which is obviously not going to suit either, and Ye Olde English type fonts. Obviously they can get a little hard to read, but one with that sort of look, while still legible would be better suited. Oh, and I've got a site.Footy Jumpers Dot Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted December 14, 2006 Share Posted December 14, 2006 Wish I'd have read that before I redid the logo. Ok, so ignore the logo for a bit... check this out:I like the dagger through the skull... the skull looks a little plain by itself, I think... which we can all take a look at on the helmet now. Look everybody it's the Raiders!Just Kidding, these are too raiderish. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sec19Row53 Posted December 14, 2006 Share Posted December 14, 2006 While the original maroon side panel was too dark and got lost, you now have a color appearing exclusively on the helmet. If it's one of your three team colors, I think you need to add it to the uniform set somewhere - outlines, trim, something.The dagger through the skull, if used as a helmet logo, makes the whole logo appear too small.I'd put the TV numbers on the shoulders, and do something with a secondary on the sleeves. It's where I sit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*AJ* Posted December 14, 2006 Share Posted December 14, 2006 For the logo, maybe don't use a profile shot. Perhaps something like the Pirates of the Caribbean logo. But not to close. Or maybe have the dagger clinched in the teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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