TheRedArmy Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 This is my first logo C&C please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew22 Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I like the wordmark, but the logo is impossible to tell its a Bill. Eagles/Heels/Dawgs/Falcons/Hawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigdub81 Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I like it but it kinda' looks like a horses head instead of a buffalo! Here are some suggestions....1) Try sloping the bridge of the nose downward like a buffalo2) You need to add some eyes and facial highlights because the 'stripe' look isn't really working3) Get rid of the drop shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I like the wordmark, but the logo is impossible to tell its a Bill....Or a Buffalo. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 it looks more like a dragon rather than a buffalo, shorten up the nose and round it out a little New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I honestly don't see the buffalo in that. A shaggy chicken is what it looks like to me. The wordmark doesn't go with the logo. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike2sana Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 wtf is that thing ATL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 anteater-horse-dragon-shaggy thing.It needs to be more buffaloey. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew22 Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 I like the wordmark, but the logo is impossible to tell its a Bill....Or a Buffalo. THat too. Eagles/Heels/Dawgs/Falcons/Hawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Presenting the new NFL expansion team: the Bufallo Anteaters! Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 could you do helmet with logo on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 It needs a lot of work. Let me offer some help:-For a buffalo, it's way too stretched out. It should be bulky and stout. Find a good reference picture to work with.-The horns are way off. See the spike you drew behind the eyes? That is a buffalo horn. The ones you added on are long and slim while a buffalo horn is short and curved.-Draw in some facial features to give it some emotion. The nose looks too small and isn't emphasized enough.-Ditch the mohawk thing he's got going on. Limit the spikes to one or two.-The drop shadow does nothing. Emphasize outlines instead, they help bring out the logo more than a drop shadow like the one you made.Keep working on it and I'll keep giving input. And don't listen to anyone who only outright insults it without giving advice on how to help it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Oh, god!It's the spawn of the Buffaslug! The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grish Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 not sure that i can tell what it is. sorry i tried, i don't see it. "Try not to have a good time ... This is supposed to be educational."- Charles Schulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgesL Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 Looks like a pterodactyl to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mctitan53 Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 I see a unicorn..... I wish I could give some advice, but I have NO idea where to start.... sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleujayone Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 I tried a crack at trying to make it look more err...."buffaloey"Buffalo Bills Logo alterarationsI got rid of the extra horns, and duplicated the white horn for the other side, gave it an eye, a mouth. It's very rough, but perhaps it can help get the ball rolling. We all have our little faults. Mine's in California. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedArmy Posted January 8, 2007 Author Share Posted January 8, 2007 i thank you guys for saying that stuff it is just what someone like me who has started needs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwk63 Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 Well if the Sabres could use a slug logo, the Bills could use a logo designed after Heckle and Jeckle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 i thank you guys for saying that stuff it is just what someone like me who has started needsAre you being sarcastic? Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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