Taylor R. Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 This is my snake logo i made it's the first logo thing i made so it still needs some work but i thought i would put it up here to see what you all thought. Go Lakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 This is my snake logo i made it's the first logo thing i made so it still needs some work but i thought i would put it up here to see what you all thought.Who are the "Nakes" ??? 5-time Defending NL East Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor R. Posted February 12, 2007 Author Share Posted February 12, 2007 The "snake" is supposto form a S i wasn't sure if that would be clear Go Lakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 The snake is well rendered. However, the image makes me think it belongs in a children's book. It's probably just the coloring, but that's what it makes me think of. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Needs a plane. And stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 I've had it with these mutha :censored:in' snakes on this mutha :censored:in' board!(and what's with the snakeheads underneath the wordmark?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattlefan68 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 The font in the wordmark is kinda blah. It looks like a title on a PowerPoint instead of a font for a team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 it looks to me like you got the actual snake from somewhere else, and added the "NAKES" and copied and pasted the heads...i mean if you could draw that snake with that quality, then why would the other elements look as they do? ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 I was thinking exactly the same thing... Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Ya I agree. Seriously. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Don't insult the members of this board by passing off clipart as your own. It seems like every 3rd or 4th concept these days is plagiarized.If you did draw that, I'll apologize. But, as the others have pointed out, it looks veeeery suspicious that you can draw a snake, yet you can't figure out how to cut and paste only the shape of its head without making it look like a hack job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 I don't want to turn this into a witch hunt, and if the snake really was yours, then I will apologize. But I'm now the 4th person to view your work and be struck by the same things, and none of us are collaborating. Which leads me to think that the 4 of us didn't arrive at the same conclusion by chance.Moreover, when you preface your concept with the disclaimer "Havent Done This Before So Cut Me some slack [sic, spelling, punctuation, capitalization], then present a reasonably well-rendered snake surrounded by subpar... well, everything else, it makes the viewer wonder even more: "Why does the artist place such an insecure subtitle on his thread, yet the snake isn't too badly done? Despite this, he must think the rest of the concept is extremely subpar."The discrepancy in skill level between the snake (good) and the rest (piss-poor) is such that you're either a snake-drawing savant... or you cut & pasted the snake for your "S", then cut the head off and used it as an underline for an MS Word font.On the off-chance that you DIDN'T rip this off and this is your own work:1. Ditch the all-head underline.2. Find a font that goes with the team name and overall design better.2a. Cursive fonts, like calligraphy fonts, look horrible when used in all-capitals - and no, I don't care what they do with prison tattoos. Still looks like - those fonts were never meant to be used like that.3. Make sure that the color of the other letters matches ONE of the colors in the logo, instead of being close but not exact. The difference is perceptible to the human eye.To answer your next question - "What's the big deal? Why is everyone so down about this?" - it is a big deal for a couple of reasons.For one, the vast majority of people here are posting 100% original work, and are seeking honest, objective critique from the other members. Your "work" bumped someone else's creative efforts off the front page, denying them their chance for an honest review. Many of us on here don't have the time or the energy to go back through the 4 pages of new concepts every time we log on, so you scan through the 1st page for something to review, and move on. 4 of us have now wasted a ton of time and effort explaining why what you did is so annyoing.For two, many of the people here are professionals who put food on their tables through creative graphic design. Cutting and pasting someone else's work and passing it off as your own is stealing, plain and simple. You're stealing from people like the people here who do this for a living, in addition to driving their efforts to the obscurity of the back pages.So... refrain from throwing this nonsense up here again. For all of us. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Word. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 You know what it reminds me of? One of those Pokemon creatures that we all used to love in 3rd grade. I don't know if it's the colors or the pixels. But that is what I thought when I first saw this concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youcan'tseeme Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 if it is your work then I would say loose the snake heads, a snake can't function without the rest of it's body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 First thing I thought of when I saw this was Pokemon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 This is my snake logo i made it's the first logo thing i made so it still needs some work but i thought i would put it up here to see what you all thought.the pixelation leads me to believe this is not your work. if it is, its alright. but ditch the "NAKES" and the butchered snakes below it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Yeah man, just tell us where you really got this. If you stole this, it really isn't fair to the true creator for not even giving recognition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 First thing I thought of when I saw this was Pokemon.Hey, hey buddy that's what I said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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