Vicious Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 what do you think, i want comments like pistonsthenextdynasty was given on his lion logo, and i will make adjustments as he did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 19, 2007 Author Share Posted February 19, 2007 after looking at it, i added some more teeth, and fixed some shadowing in the mane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 it's nice, but do you really want a yawning lion as your logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 A: It needs an eye andB: It looks an awful lot like Fraser Davidson's BC Lions concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 19, 2007 Author Share Posted February 19, 2007 do you think it would look less like it was yawning if i turned it like this:, but added an eye, and fixed the flow of his mane?and btw, i didnt copy his design, i vectorized it from this picture:http://www.mccullagh.org/db9/d30-7/lion-yawning.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 I think the lion is yawning in that picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunnydaleSpike Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 I think the lion is yawning in that picture. In the jungle, the mighty jungle, the lion sleeps tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueSky Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 Was your sig the inspiration?Honestly, not feeling this look for the lion. And as someone else said, he needs an eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 19, 2007 Author Share Posted February 19, 2007 does this look better? i think that by adding an eye, it doesnt look like hes yawning, and more like he's roaring. i think if i were to make a concept team with this logo, they would be called the "Roar".what should i do?CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 First of all, try to avoid using strokes. Outline those strokes if necessary, and then modify points.Secondly, use colour where the light will hit the lion. This is not about outlining a lion and colouring him in, its about giving him texture and depth.Third, if your detail lines need to be that thin, you don't need that much detail.Fourth, don't tie yourself to a photo. Photographs often have subtleties that don't look good in a logo, and you'll be tempted to make the logo match the photo. For instance, look at the fangs, specifically the one at the top in the foregroujnd. What's wrong with it? Using this kind of critical eye will help you improve your logos by yourself without relying purely on the suggestions of others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 It looks better than the first one but I think the mouth is open too much...Cat Eyes - Josh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gazzzaf Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 i think if i were to make a concept team with this logo, they would be called the "Roar".what should i do?CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 thanks, this is my first real creation on illustrator. i think the mouth might be open too much as well. Phil, what do you mean by Outlining strokes and how do i modify points?thanks for the pic Gazzzaf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 It's the bottom jaw that makes it look like the lion is yawning, when you yawn the bottom jaw will go back further like the way you are depicting it.Have the jaw come out further, much like your Ray Lewis sig, he's giving out a roar...its right under your nose, the way you want it to look, use Ray Lewis' face as a template, work off it.That's my 2 cents, hope it helps you some. LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 thanks, im workin on that right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Look, it even says yawning!http://www.mccullagh.org/db9/d30-7/lion-yawning.jpg You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 yeah, i knew it was yawing in the first place, i just thought it looked cool, and maybe i could pull it off as a roar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Yeah....no. It's closer now, but still not right. The mouth is way too big for the size of the head, and the mouth is too triangulated.Try this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 The lines seem to angular, try and smooth them out. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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