slightly shotgunned Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 was fooling around with paint in the computer lab and came up with this logo concept for one of my fantasy fb teams, the New York Empire. i am aware that it needs to be cleaned up a bit, but still i'm looking mostly for criticism here. credits...well, i did a google search for the empire state building and found that building logo (supposed to be the empire state building, but i'm not sure about it) i don't remember the exact site though. the font is something along the lines of "sans black thirteen" from Dafont.com. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I'm assuming you took it from this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slightly shotgunned Posted February 22, 2007 Author Share Posted February 22, 2007 that's the one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 Your head esplode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I think a little more detail in the building would look better. Not too much detail, but just enough. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I think the building is a little too small compared to the rest of the design ? the blue star, the wordmark, etc. You're also using a fairly extended font, which is drawing things out horizontally. Something more condensed would make this a lot stronger and a lot more vertical, I think.I would knock those other elements down in size so that the building is the dominant element. What I'd even like to see is the building extended so that it forms the I in EMPIRE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wingsfan85 Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 reminds me of space invaders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 In addition to the detail, I think the colors for just don't work with the "Empire" name. What you have here reminds me of a fast food restaurant. When I think "Empire", I see shades of blue, grey and copper. (but that's just me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slightly shotgunned Posted February 23, 2007 Author Share Posted February 23, 2007 here's a seemingly stupid question but, what do you mean when you say more detail on the building. do you mean detail like windows, detail like shadows, detail like people working on the inside (a joke)... thanks for the comments so far, i am taking them seriously and i'll get an update here when i get the chance. since i'm working from the school's comp. lab though that may take awhile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningfan Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 I would darken the colors like batmans metropolis. Maybe work in a steely blue or dark green? Maybe the yellow could be a dark cooper?I agree the building should be bigger.I would also change the name to Empires. Sounds more major league to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 I would darken the colors like batmans metropolis. Maybe work in a steely blue or dark green? Maybe the yellow could be a dark cooper?I agree the building should be bigger.I would also change the name to Empires. Sounds more major league to me.Do you mean Gotham city? You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgie6543 Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 The first thing I thought of when I saw this was communism, because of the red and yellow. I think changing the colors and condensing the font would be the best way to go here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 Change the colors to more of a Home Alone II Blue and Black feel. Now thatd be toasty!!!! On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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