elliott Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I was doodling in the margins during class and I came up with something like this:Tell me what you think Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zig Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I find the A,T and, L very hard to see. The yellow line is also too small. I like the color choice though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I agree. Also, the 'A' & 'L' get lost in the shape of the lightning bolt, whereas the 'T' seems out of place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 23, 2007 Author Share Posted February 23, 2007 I made some changes: Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 It looks a little better, but the T still looks out of place. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DailyRich Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Just something quick and dirty I tossed off in Paint: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baseballking99 Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Just something quick and dirty I tossed off in Paint:That looks cool. Nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor R. Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 that looks alot better Go Lakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 24, 2007 Author Share Posted February 24, 2007 Added this script logo:What do you think? Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 Added this script logo:What do you think?I think you should ditch the lightning bolts, find a good font, make it italics, and use a lightning bolt as an underline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 i think this design looked alot better on your paper than on paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCC Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 i think this design looked alot better on your paper than on paint.yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 24, 2007 Author Share Posted February 24, 2007 My absolute LAST try at this! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 Change your team name to the Atlanta Krunk Wolverines in homage to the ABA team and you've got my support...On a serious note: look to other teams with the lightning nickname for inspiration. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 To be honest, that font really doesn't look like something a team called the Lightning would use. Perhaps a larger, thicker font like Impact would be a better choice: try experimenting with different type faces, and see what works best. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 My absolute LAST try at this! Better, but as said before, you need a better font. Something like the Chargers... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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