Chief. Posted March 3, 2007 Share Posted March 3, 2007 This is just for fun, possibly a fantasy team logo, but any help on how to improve it would be appreciated: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baseballking99 Posted March 3, 2007 Share Posted March 3, 2007 It looks really nice but my only comment would be that the white extends too far into the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted March 3, 2007 Share Posted March 3, 2007 This is just for fun, possibly a fantasy team logo, but any help on how to improve it would be appreciated:Get some jaw bone seperation or make it a little more abstract. You have agreat start but the mane looks like it is running into the neck. flare it out a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 Looks good, but i don't like the eyes. They should be more fierce looking. Kinda looks like he is tired Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 Looks like he's mad and high at the same time, which doesn't work because...well you just can't be both! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
espo Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 It's a good start but to me it looks like a man wearing a lion mask on the top of his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 Lengthen the snout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted March 4, 2007 Author Share Posted March 4, 2007 Okay, take 2. I'm currently working on some new eyes (eyes are not my strong point). I changed the outline to white because I think it brings it out more: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 As of now, there is no snout. Creating a longer one will really help this concept. Also, the bottom teeth have a much thinner outline than the rest of the outlines, which are thick and bold. With the eyes looking half closed, it looks sleepy, and not nearly as intimidating as it could.I think the actual nose could be enlarged slightly, and just in general, some of the shapes could be simplified and cleaned up a bit.Great start though, and I look forward to seeing your progress on this. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 Eyes too close together. Wrong shapes.What are the lines coming out from the nose. Like some straps, or something.White around front doesn't look like a tiger's. Look at a photo to re-adjust.The shape juts upward past the jaw (right to left). Shouldn't do that. The jagged shape at the left edge looks like a Christmas tree. Too straight. Get some arcs, curves in there. We'll look forward to seeing it again soon. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 Either Google or Yahoo some tiger photos and try and find one at that angle and really pay attention to its features - especially how the eyes are trully placed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kreg13 Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 yes the eyes look kinda lifeless......but yes it's a good startwhen i first saw it i thought it could be an update of colorado college's logo.......but i like CC's logo just fine........it makes for one of the best uniforms in hockey: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Made a different eye:Just threw it together so its not that good, but I think an improvement Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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