highlanders08 Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 This is a secondary logo I made in Illustrator for my high school. Our nickname is the Highlandersand our colours are green and white. I'm looking for a way to incorporate green into the logo, and I dont know how to change the form of the BMHS text to fit the shield.Any thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snetsrak43 Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 The first thing I thought of was this logo:partially because I just did a design for that team, but more importantly because it is similar because of the crossing of the sticks (or swords in your case).And I think you can even incorporate green if you incorporate some of the things that make this logo work into your own. 1- Outline. Add a green outline? You lack an outline really right now. Your lines only serve the purpose to shape the swords. 2- Text outside the shield. You can see their "shield" is the capital building. The city and name is outside of that. 3- Using a crest? I don't know if your school has some type of crest or if you can make one up, but a crest might look better and you need some way to fill space.4- Then notice they have the stars and puck to fill dead space. Think of something you can do to fill that dead space. 5- Finally I'm not sure its within your abilities, but a more stylized sword would look better. Think of the Cleveland Cavs sword. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 I agree with pretty much everything snetsrak said, definetely better swords, yours are kind of boring. Also, make the font more italicized and sleek looking Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kreg13 Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 i also agree w/ the previous posts: more interesting font....a little bigger also...and since they're the highlanders, maybe make the blades a bit skinnier so they look like scottish claymores(lond swords) and maybe add a tartan sash or banner or trim...or somethingbut it's a good start... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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