Vicious Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 CNC PLEASE!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-(dp)- Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 These aren't bad. One thing though, your home uniforms have gold jerseys, and the whole uniform is pretty much gold and white with black accents. But on the aways, It seems to be black and white with gold accents. You should either add more black in the home uniforms, or add more gold to the aways, like gold pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alphabet Man Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 As Pistonsthenextdinastyplusanyotherwordshecanaddtohisusername said, the home needs more black. The gold stripe down the side of the gold jersey just doesn't seem to go. The helmet also needs something on it. The curve on the pants is I think, a bit too curved. I think soemthing needs to be a tad modified a bit. I like the colour combinations and especially the away socks. They look cool. twitter.com/thebrainofMatt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 The Georgia Tech Knights?Other than that, they look cool, I like the helmet Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 copperplate party foul!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted March 25, 2007 Author Share Posted March 25, 2007 thanks for the CnC guys, im proud of the helmets, i like the concept. the gold is actually a lot more orange than it was in illustrator... i dont know what happened. prolly happened when i changed it to a PSD.thanks again,Vicious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 Very cool. Have you tried making either the visor or the main part of the helmet a slightly darker or lighter shade of gold in order to set it apart just a bit? At first glance and from a distance it's hard to make out that it's a knight's helmet.And it may drift over into a bit too cutesy or minor league, but what about making the side stripe on the jersey and pants in the shape (and possibly the color) of a sword? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted March 25, 2007 Share Posted March 25, 2007 The helmet is sweet -My fantasy Arena Team is the New Haven Knights - but we have blue & silver as our main colors.Nice Concept!!! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 Very cool. Have you tried making either the visor or the main part of the helmet a slightly darker or lighter shade of gold in order to set it apart just a bit? At first glance and from a distance it's hard to make out that it's a knight's helmet.And it may drift over into a bit too cutesy or minor league, but what about making the side stripe on the jersey and pants in the shape (and possibly the color) of a sword?yeah, i thought about the sword thing, but i was trying to keep it a little more realistic i guess. i think if i put a sword on the side, it could looks kind of cheesy, and XFL-ish.i will see if i can come up with anything cool with the helmet though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I would make the helmet black except the visor. It would really make the visor stand out. Bravo for thinking out side the box. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 the only thing i can really say i like here is the helmet. you can tell it was one of those "hmm i wonder how this would look" ideas. Not just a "i want our team to look like this team" move. from the neck down it could use some fresh, or less common elements anyways. Looikin forward for a ver2.0 ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 Just a suggestion...Homes- make the side stripe blackAways- Make side stripes gold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I love the helmet. It's incredibly clever. Make the "mask" part of it though a bit more defined. It doesn't standout from the rest of the helmet. Perhaps a plume from the center to the back as well (optional)?As far as the uniforms, they look good. They are very simple. So simple, that they look somewhat incomplete and naked to my eye. Honestly, I think it may have something to do with the helmet. Make the helmet "pop" more and I think it'll accentuate the uniforms much better.Overall good concept and great idea. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beansdooma Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 That pants stripe is waaaaay too curvy.I like the helmet though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 alright, thanks a ton guys, im fixin it up, and then ill repost it on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 added a smaller, but less gaudy stripe, and made the helmet black to bring out the helmet, and also add more black the the uniform, also added the shoulder stripes.CnC Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 really nice...Helmet- A+Jerseys- AWordmark- A+Overall- A+Great job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 The change in uniforms is a definite improvement in my opinion. As is, the road uniform is much better. The helmet is leaps and bounds ahead of your original version. Is it too much black, however? Just to see what it looks like what if the helmet was gold with a black mask? Great job. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Fantastic improvements. The helmet looks cool as is, but I wonder if you've lost a little bit of the feel that the whole football helmet was a knight's helmet. Now, it is only a visor, suggesting a knight's helmet. I'd still like to see a two-toned gold helmet, or maybe even make it white except for the visor. White would go better with the theme of shining golden knight.But even if nothing changes, it's a great set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beansdooma Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Still has too much emphasis on black in the aways. Maybe change to gold pants (on the aways only), that would help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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