33hooligan Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I am working to make a concept logo to go with my concept jersey. Please give thoughts, likes and dislikes of logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIGERSFAN92826 Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I like the first one one the way bottom... but the duck looks like a swan cuz its white and try taking out the red line inside the "A" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I think it would look a lot better if the wordmark and red line weren't in the "A." | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 - Simplify - Way too much detail for a logo. They're great illustrations, but they don't work well as logos.- In general, there's just too much going on in them. I'd stick to just one or two objects, rather than the "A", the wings, the stick, the duck head etc.- The wings read to me as more of an Angels feel, rather than a duck. Also, the duck head doesn't really mesh well. The duck's head is somewhat cartoony, as opposed to the realistic quality of the wings.- The "Ducks" in the crossbar of the "A" is distracting. I'd just get rid of it.- Try messing with some different colors. Gold and orange don't really go together all that well. Perhaps try dark green as a color, or maybe even toy with the return of eggplant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I like the second on in the third line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armadillo19 Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 I like what you're going for...IMO the Ducks have the WORST logo and jersey in the NHL and really need something new. The one thing that stands out is that the wings look more like that of an angel or something rather than a duck. I think the feathers may be too wide or something, and the wing isn't angluar enough. Also as someone else said, the duck head sort of looks like a swan. Nonetheless, I really like what you're going for here. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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