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MattF

My first concept that I'm posting

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It's the Arizona Cardinals! I've always thought they would look good with a dark blue and gold in addition to the dark red. The little thing on the number is supossed to be like the top of the Cardinal head. I have absolutly no idea why I did the side stripes.

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C&C please

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You've definently gone mad.

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Lime Green doesn't really work on anything, except for maybe a 1970 Plymouth Superbird. :D

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Lime Green doesn't really work on anything, except for maybe a 1970 Plymouth Superbird. :D

I don't know what you're talking about. There's no lime green anywhere near this concept. :blink:

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It's more of a poop green. I think if you changed the colors it might look better. (Where di blue come from?)

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It's supossed to be gold. I said in my first post I always thought they'd look pretty good with gold and dark blue.

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Lime Green doesn't really work on anything, except for maybe a 1970 Plymouth Superbird. :D

Dude. Petty Blue.

Um, I don't even know what to say. The numbers are weird, for starters. The helmets just don't look right to me. I don't like th side stripes. However, the addition of dark blue could be interesting if executed well.

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You should make the greenish color look like more of a gold. The helmet stripe and side panels look an awful lot like the Broncos too. You should probably stick to just the basic number font without the thing that's supposed to look like a cardinal head. The numbers remind me of an Arena team, maybe the LA Avengers. I'd say keep the numbers in the AFL.

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What the hell is...that?

My thoughts exactly...Your side panels are completely messed up, and the last jersey looks like someone threw up.

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Lime Green doesn't really work on anything, except for maybe a 1970 Plymouth Superbird. :D

I don't know what you're talking about. There's no lime green anywhere near this concept. :blink:

<shrugs> That's the shade it looks to me.

Definately not the "gold" color you were shooting for. Way too much green in it.

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What the hell is...that?

My thoughts exactly...Your side panels are completely messed up, and the last jersey looks like someone threw up.

gees guys, he said it was his first concept... Give him a break and try to remember your first concepts...

Keep them coming cap... Create new ones and have fun!

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What the hell is...that?

My thoughts exactly...Your side panels are completely messed up, and the last jersey looks like someone threw up.

gees guys, he said it was his first concept... Give him a break and try to remember your first concepts...

Keep them coming cap... Create new ones and have fun!

My first concept had matching colors.

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:blink:

1. Red logo on red helmet = a red mess when seen from more than a couple feet away.

2. That's not gold. Not by a longshot.

3. Your side panels take up more fabric than the body of the jersey - thus, your "white" jersey is more red than white.

4. The number font is too wide; if a single normal-width digit occupies most of the torso, how would you fit an "88" on there?

5. The side panels are far too wide to pair up with the tapering triangular panels on the pants.

6. Your concept would require the Cardinals to use 3 different sets of white pants and 3 different pair of socks... that's just wasteful, especially for items that the NFL doesn't sell to its fans.

7. The number font contributes nothing, other than as mentioned in #4. It doesn't fit the wordmark or the team that I can see.

I know it's a first try, so you can only go up from here, I s'pose...

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It's more of a poop green. I think if you changed the colors it might look better. (Where di blue come from?)
I dont normaly look at poop but id have to say its pretty close.

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Do the numbers have a tumor?

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It looks like the players had a rough practice & puked on the jerseys :P

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Do the numbers have a tumor?

[Arnold Accent] Its not a tumor! [/Arnold Accent]

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