Tournament logo - feedback please

[triordan14]

Guys,

  I love this forum for logos and learning the art of creating. I made a tournament logo for the 2004 Colonial Athletic Association Baseball Tournament. I'm still learning the ins and outs of Illustrator. Please send some feedback on the logo.

Thanks.

http://www.uncw.edu/athletics/2004%20CAA%20Tournament/index.htm

Tom Riordan

Ast. SID

UNC Wilmington

[Reaper98]

I like the way that you're going with that logo but I would suggest making the outlines for your text a tad thicker to emphasize the edging a bit more.

[paynomind]

Yes, agreed.. the baseball and wave are both good. You need thicker outlines on the text.

Also, consider a light grey crecent-shape on the baseball, to give some depth.

well done.

[Phil]

In addition to the adding of depth to the baseball, as paynomind suggests, might I suggest more of a unified colour scheme (the colours of the wave would be more than enough... dark green, dark blue, gray, white), and also, have the wave come in front of the baseball, as right now it's tough to judge where the wave actually is... if it were coming around and over the ball, the right side of the wave should be between the viewer and the right side of the ball.

I hope you understand what I'm trying to convey here.

Good luck.

[zer0dotcom]

I really like how you've arranged all the information into the shape it is, very creative. I agree with reaper, make the outline around the script uniform, it does look off how it gets thick between the letters, and then really thin on the outside