Billy B Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 I took some more time this one, and I think it's a lot better than my first two teams.AL EASTBlue JaysAL CENTRALWhite SoxOnto the concept. Tampa Bay has been rumored to be dropping the "Devil" and making the colors light blue and yellow. I thought this would be good for the Rays, so that is what the concept is based on. The jerseys and pants are pretty simple. Just striped sleeves and stripes running down the pants. With the removal of devil from the team name I took out the devil ray logo and stuck to a TB similar to what they are using now. For the alternate hat I put a yellow triangle in the front, and I think that this looks good.HOMEROADALTERNATEC&C as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youppi! Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 these should lower the lighting costs in their dome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Donald Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 Agreed, touch on the bright side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 way to plain...lack of detail, more effort needed i think. i think your circle TB logo sums up this one. Not that you shouldn't keep trying...just try more than simply typing letters and numbers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted May 20, 2007 Author Share Posted May 20, 2007 Here is the alternate with a darker blue. I'll see if I can come up with a logo later on. I'm not that good with logos so that is why I kept it simple, but I'll try to put something good together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 Dude, seriously, put some thought and real effort into it. Don't just take a typeface and spell out the team name and slap it on the jerseys at an angle and think it's a concept. Use your imagination. Show some creative effort. Now I want you to try this again, and don't stop until you get laid....uh, sorry, get it right. (Got the lecture confused with a lecture I recieved..... ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 I like some of the ideas behind this, but it needs work.First, the problem wasn't the blue on the original uniforms. It was the yellow -- it's way too bright. Think of a yellow that's halfway between what you have and the gold worn by UCLA.Second, don't be afraid to tweak the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted May 21, 2007 Author Share Posted May 21, 2007 I've made a rough draft of a logo that could be used for this concept. With the elimination of the devil ray logo and just using the name Rays, I made the logo represent the sun in Florida. The yellow used is darker than the original. Any C&C on the logo or uniforms is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 Wide Latin does not work as a wordmark, logo, or nameplate font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 C'mon dude this is shoddy even for paint. first thing i would do is mimic other professional logos, look at the elements/styles and whatnot. THEN maybe you'll have an idea when approaching a "concept" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunderstruk Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 uninspired if u ask me. I just don't think it works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted May 22, 2007 Author Share Posted May 22, 2007 Updated the logo again. I think this is a step in the right direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 i still think your in too deep trying to make an original logo. its just very blah..start with the old logo and then edit around it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshey Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 looks too much like the old brewers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted May 22, 2007 Share Posted May 22, 2007 Dude, bail out now. You have nosedived. Save yourself before it's too late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravenmaster Posted May 23, 2007 Share Posted May 23, 2007 That patch is so....weird. The sun would look nice instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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