cyandlux Posted June 12, 2007 Author Share Posted June 12, 2007 As the wordmark youre right, but the stand alone would be on the helmets, jerseys, etc...and I think that is okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 I really can't get over the Panthers' neck... Too bad, because I really like the jaw and face.Have you try just the Head, without the neck?I also think you need to work on getting the head to blend more into the wordmark.All in all it's a very good logo, I like those colours to start with... @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 12, 2007 Author Share Posted June 12, 2007 Heres an example of inividual sports....I think Im too close to this project now, so here is a no neck version....I think its pretty strong....but is it an improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 The no neck version is very nice, I think the head works just by itself. Plus that way it doesn't look so much like the Panthers Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 I think you've hit it with your latest revision. The head and neck mesh with the wordmark nicely now, and for an alt, I like your no-neck version. I have no suggestions for any further improvements. Great work - the effort has paid off!LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 i'm with ltravisjr...these revisions are fantastici'm still not sold on using the ball in the sport-specific marks...in both of your examples, the ball is distracting - it competes with your primary logo/wordmark, and i'm left wondering what happened to the rest of the ball or why paso robles plays with baseballs which have been cut in half - i think the mark is strong enough without the ball imagerythis will be an OUTSTANDING high school identity package...fantastic work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 13, 2007 Author Share Posted June 13, 2007 Whatcha think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 I like it all, except the soccer logo, the cat's head seems to be just slapped on there. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HarperK Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 i like it all except for the Main logo's wordmark, it looks very uninspired and generic. ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 16, 2007 Author Share Posted June 16, 2007 i like it all except for the Main logo's wordmark, it looks very uninspired and generic.I mean, it is Arial Black......I never said it wasn't. You're dealing with a small town here and I dont want to rock the boat, so I used something that was solid and not at all very "modern."Heres a rejected wordmark... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 I'm going to have to disagree with the masses and say that I like the simple wordmark. I think it does a great job complementing the logo, not competing with it. Even standing alone, the wordmark is going to be better than at least 99% of what other high schools use, assuming that they even have a standard wordmark.BTW, does anyone know what the hell a bearcat is? I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 the rejected one is 10x better...but im not saying it has to be crazily detailed or anything, i think something simple with like a block font would work perfect ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 There something about the whiskers that doesnt seem right to me. I dont know they look kinda wierd. Anyone else see it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 I like the use of Arial as well. It is actually kind of refreshing. As much as anyone would like to say it is over used, I think it has been underused as a result. While it may not be 100% original/creative it is classic for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 16, 2007 Author Share Posted June 16, 2007 Heres the other.....PS I am this {} tempted to turn it in with no wordmark and both heads...they can choose, basically theyre going to choose anyway. Id rather give them a choice and have them approve it then no choice at all and reject it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 Get rid of the thin white/thin red outlines, just go with a thick white one.Its golden with that change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 i'd rather give them a choice and have them approve it than no choice at all and reject it.that's a terrible attitude. have confidence in your abilities and your ideas, and if you already do, then show it! let the client know you have that confidence in what you produce. if you give them more than one version, they will always pick the one you hate. show them that you know what works and what doesn't; what looks good and what looks amateurish. if they're smart, they'll realize that they should trust the dude who knows what he's doing. if not, sell it to someone else. p.s. use helvetica instead of arial if you're going that route. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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cyandlux Posted June 18, 2007 Author Share Posted June 18, 2007 This is what Im going with..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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