Dave Ship Posted June 8, 2007 Share Posted June 8, 2007 Here's my first try at baseball franchise. Sorry, no time at the moment for a description. My team is playing the basketball semifinals, right now! My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 8, 2007 Share Posted June 8, 2007 The Pirate seems a little too anime-ish, and the black pants are, just no, baseball pants are either white or grey. I like the rest of it though, nice job. Glad to see no red! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted June 8, 2007 Share Posted June 8, 2007 I think it's impossible to improve on what the Pirates have now. And why does your logo look like Kevin Smith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FattySeth Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 it looks like what they have now but not as goodthe logo looks like a cartoon to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 it looks like what they have now but not as goodthe logo looks like a cartoon to meYeah. That's what they had last season. The only difference between this and this year's set is the return of the pinstripe and no red vest... which is a plus, but not necessary for a concept. Also the outlines are totally huge and unwarranted.And why is the pirate a mentally challenged metrosexual who looks like he can't look right at the camera because he's distracted by a bug flying by? Â Â https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Falcon Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 I think it's impossible to improve on what the Pirates have now. And why does your logo look like Kevin Smith.I think the Pirates should bring back the mix-n-match unis from the "We Are Family" era. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkleton Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 I almost dont want to draw attention to the bad points cos I love beatnik's concepts but...That pirate It looks like it was his first day with the new hook and he's just scratched his backside....Unis are ok, but I'll leave the C&C for those to the guys who know more about baseball unis than me. I will say this, I dont like black pants on a baseball uniform but....cant see any here!? My teams pants are black...with white jerseys. I hate it..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fjm Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 I like that the player name is in the same font as the number. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeremyb Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 like the jerseys, not so big on the logos though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3wide.com Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 I like it, although the pirate almost seems too much like a drawing of one of the players on the field which could get weird if someone looked like him and had a picture of someone that looked like him on the chest I like the Black uniforms, a bit of a change in style is always interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 Wow...just wow... this is one great concept. This is fantastic! Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 This is a rare misstep for you beatnik. The uniforms need some refining, like playing around with bevels in Illustrator and the primary logo really needs to be reworked. I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swilson160 Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 The pirate looks like he's on crack. This would have been a more appropriate Pirates' logo in the early 1980s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Like the unis, but not feeling that logo. Pimp the current Bucs logo that way and it's perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aerodynamix Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 Keep everything else, because the wordmark and cap logo are perfect. But please, ditch the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mantleisthebest7 Posted September 29, 2007 Share Posted September 29, 2007 Your Pirate looks like he's constipated. Like he needs to take some ex-lax and he needs to take it NOW!! I think that everything looks really great except for that Pirate. It's just not working. Jimmy Eat World Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.