Ben5 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 I've been working on this logo for the past few days. I intend it to be a fantasy logo.As you can see, it's in black and white because I am still undecided about the colors. Right now I'm thinking navy, dennis blue, white, and maybe a dark green accent. C&C is greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 It looks too generic. The only thing "marine" about it is the trident. In the secondary I think "devil's pitchfork" over Posideon's trident. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 That took you a few days? https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cappital92 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 Make the pitchfork thicker. That'll make it more like a trident. Maybe putting the trident though the script could make this look much cooler. http://www.wizardsxtra.com Is it the shoes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 That looks waaaay too corporate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 Try adding waves, that should make it a lot better, cause it does kinda look devilish right now, but I'm sure once you put some color in it will look better too. I like your color choices BTW. I'd also go with a new font, I think Aldo is a little too skinny, try something more stronger. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pandaguy87 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 Well I think it's a nice start (a very nice start), but it's not very sports-logo-esque the way it is. Uh, what sport is it for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 too much like a company, not a sports teamand wheres the color man? wheres the blue and yellow?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 I like the font...just decide on some colors and I agree on altering the pitchfork into a trident. Otherwise, sweet job. (MLF) Chicago Cannons, (IHA) Phoenix Firebirds - 2021 Xtreme Cup Champions (WAFL) Phoenix Federals - WAFL World Bowl XII Champions (Defunct) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
33hooligan Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 It's a start...I agree with most of the suggestions above. Right now it's to sterol and needs some depth and style. Ilike the font choice.. what is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 Got potential.BTW, McCall has the funniest sig I've ever seen erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockngoalie1 Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 i say make the pitchfork fancier...take a look at almost any of the Aquaman comics, his are very intricate, whereas yours is not. also, i agree with the wave idea...although im not sure how you would use the both of them in one logo...definitely a good idea, cant wait to see how it progresses Maryland Terrapins Uniform Tracker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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