MVP Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 My first actual fantasy concept, 2nd sports logo ever (1st one didn't go so well ).The tertiary isn't so much an identity, just the wordmark on the road jersey. (And yes, I know I put it under colour palette...). Obviously I spent much more time on the logos than the jerseys, so I expect more critique on the logo! C&C? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 very nice - i like the color combo - the ball lines in the secondary kind of throw it off...i think it would be stronger without them (i also think you should use an M instead of a C, but that's personal preference), but that's the only real beef i have with the logos - great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burning River Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 Very nice concept over-all. I like the cyclone/basketball logo. The "C" logo seems a bit off. The "C" is very prominent, but the cyclone gets lost. Maybe use the "M" rather than the "C", then the cyclone could be centered top or bottom. Or you could try to use the "C" or "M" entirely inside the thick black out-line of the cyclone. Like I said though, over all very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 You've used black quite heavily in the logos but it's nowhere on the jerseys which makes the logo stand out and draw away from the design of the jersey. Incorporate some black into the jersey and shorts and it will look great! Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 I like that you made the script concave. It really gives off a "whirling" vibe. I don't like the multi-toned coloring though. To me it's like you're trying to also convey some sort of wave. It's distracting. I think a simple solid color will be stronger.Your secondary is the weakest element in the set. It just looks forced, especially with the back of the 'C' "between" the cyclone. I agree with the above that my preference would be an 'M' since the logo already says, "cyclones."Given your lack of a tertiary , I think that just the cyclone logo would work. Put that on the shorts instead of that confusing seconday.Great work and with a couple tweaks this will be a concept to take the IBL by storm! "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 Your secondary is the weakest element in the set. It just looks forced, especially with the back of the 'C' "between" the cyclone. I agree with the above that my preference would be an 'M' since the logo already says, "cyclones."Bingo. Make the C into an M and you got yourself a great concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 Very Nice. You could still keep the C with the cyclone logo making up the negative space of the C. Also you could try working the ball lines into the swirl lines. But you could just leave it alone and it is still a good look. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 They look excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DisturbedShifty Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 I am not a basketball fan, but I tell you what these are awesome. I personally think if the Miami Heat were to ever change their name this would be the way they should go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 The primary logo with the basketball inside the cyclone is sheer brilliance. I would recommend adding an accent color into the set to fill it out a bit more. The teal/grey/black combo as it is looks good, but one more color would really make it pop. Overall very nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Am A Flaming Douche Bag Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 The colours flow well but the text on the front is a bit small and Im not a fan of the font you chose. However those logos are pretty sweet. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted July 9, 2007 Author Share Posted July 9, 2007 Alright, thanks for the comments guys!I'm going to try to re-create a new secondary with the suggestions.Also, I'm probably going to spice up the striping on the jerseys as well, maybe with a third colour or something.Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted July 11, 2007 Author Share Posted July 11, 2007 UPDATE!I tried the M for the secondary... but I just couldn't get it to look right, so I kept a C, but modified it. I also added a tertiary.C&C? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted July 11, 2007 Share Posted July 11, 2007 That just looks freakin' awesome! Great work! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 12, 2007 Share Posted July 12, 2007 Absolutely fantastic. The secondary and the tertiary are phenomenal. "MIA" with a palm tree/cyclone? Brilliant! "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted July 12, 2007 Share Posted July 12, 2007 Nice colors for a team from Miami - kinda tropical blue. I really like the secondary alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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