Turkleton Posted July 27, 2007 Share Posted July 27, 2007 Hello!! I've been away designing these for about a week now, I'm really trying to bring a more professional look to things, all using MS Paint! Orginally No7 was going to be the Traverse City Beach Bums, but due to the uniforms looking like a pile of arse, I decided to go back to those and do the Admirals insteadI chose the Admirals because the current cheery lil' skull sucks. I cant think why they changed it to that and im more baffled about the colour change. So I went back to the old blue/maroon/white colours and decided I'd design a battle ship. Secondary logo is supposed to tie in with the primary, and still be quite simple, as I wanted it as a shoulder patch as well. Home / away jerseys, I wanted something different, but not too different, so I just let the wavy line tool do its thing until something inspired me. I wanted a contrasting look for the alternate, so went with straight lines and basic design. The 'A' shoulder patch is there in place of what was a battleship patch, but it didnt sit well on the shirt.Im really trying to improve my concepts and I think I'm getting there. My aim is to be the Master of Paint C&C would be greatfully received Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
udubs03 Posted July 27, 2007 Share Posted July 27, 2007 First off, I totally agree with you about the Ad's latest logo/color set.I love the return to blue/maroon/white and the striping pattern on the jerseys.I think for the primary logo, I know you have the guns and everything, but I'm still getting a Royal Caribbean feel. Maybe a few sharper edges would give it a more battleship feel?I'm digging the secondary logo and the script.Nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted July 27, 2007 Share Posted July 27, 2007 The only thing I'm not feelin' about this is your primary logo. It looks way too corporate to be a hockey logo. That said, it still beats the hell outta that pee-wee roller hockey skeleton they're using now. Definite upgrade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkleton Posted July 31, 2007 Author Share Posted July 31, 2007 Ok, tried to make the battleship look less like a cruise liner....Any good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenatorJake Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 I don't know what you guys are talking about.I love the happy skeleton.This would be a major downgrade IMO.The home & away ones look okay. Those colours are a bit overused for hockey.The logo could use more than one colour. But all things considered... you're getting pretty good with paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
udubs03 Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 that looks a lot more battleship-like. and as sen. jake said, i love the quality of your work considering paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 Closer, but still too much like a cruise ship. Still, I think you're on the right track.FWIW, I'm an Ads fan who loves the current scheme and don't want to see them change. But I like what you're doing here.The wave pattern is just subtle enough to be okay. Don't try to copy the seasick numbers that the Islanders used, though.EDIT: Did you change the wave pattern? Don't like the red.Watch out as well for getting to close to the Norfolk Admirals. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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